IXTRA THECK

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(08/14/2017)[-]

whats your goal in all of this? to entertain people? to ramble? to grow a yt game channel? figure out whats most important to you in making this channel and make it your own as it's a little all over the place.

#3 to #2 - derriculous [OP]

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(08/14/2017)[-]

I appreciate the feedback, but I must admit it to not fully understand.

" to entertain people? to ramble? to grow a yt game channel?" I don't think these goals are mutually exclusive. To me, they can all be applicable.

And to be perfectly honest, you basically listed what my goals are for my channel to a T...

I admit, the videos are still coming out as disharmonious racket, "all over the place" like you said, I'm just not quite sure what to do about that.

#4 to #3 - cleu

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(08/15/2017)[-]

it feels like you are borrowing elements from too many youtubers and compiling them. None of it feels really original and interesting enough to really watch. Maybe try editing your video and splicing out the excess to trim the fat and boring elements to make a more finished product.

#1 - anon id: edcd4036

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(08/13/2017)[-]

meh

I'd hugely appreciate any comments y'all have, I would like to make my videos better any way I can so critique away.