Hello there FunnyJunk!
For those of you that don't know I'm currently writing a book inspired by a post I saw here about a Grandma that summons a demon. I enjoyed the idea so much that I wanted to write. I made a poll in a previous post on how the community wanted to preview my book before I did anything serious with it (either printing it out or just putting it on Amazon or such) The general consensus was to post every chapter. I did want to do this originally, so I could get real-time feedback on everything that I write. As such I am giving y'all the link to the google doc that I'm using to write the story. Anybody can comment, and I did do some testing to make sure that comments left by some wouldn't be deleted by some ******* troll.
Here's the link: docs.google.com/document/d/1sY0hizXkJ...
I appreciate any and all help that you give me, and you're more than free to just read it if you want. Feedback is appreciated though not necessary in the slightest. For those that just want to read the chapters here instead of going to some littered google doc spammed with colors, I'll try to be consistent in posting new chapters into a collection list and this mention list.