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Hands looks really nice but the breasts and collarbones feel off, imo. I get that it's a stylized anime typ of drawing, but you wouldn't get that deep Y-parting of the titties without a military grade push-up bra, I think adding more space between the breasts would make it look more natural, or you might add a bra strap if you prefer the pushed-up look.
Regarding the collarbones, I think they are too angled and go too far down/close to each other. A good tip is to sit in front of a mirror and study how your bones and tissues move and protrude when you do different poses, and maybe try and photograph yourself in the poses you want to draw to get a better perspective of where everything goes!

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#20 to #18 - asswad [OP]

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Thanks for the feedback very constructive you deserve a big tiddi goth gf kind sir

#21 to #20 - fruhest

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tyvm and if you'd like please keep me updated and I could check out your future pieces

#22 to #21 - asswad [OP]

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If you don't mind I have a Twitter and a deviant art page posted in the description if you add me there you'll see my new pieces and even WIP images long before funnyjunk but I'll still mention you here anyway it's just for an heads up my friend

#17 - lionizeme

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there's an art channel, you should post on that channel if you want fellow artists to share feedbacks

#19 to #17 - asswad [OP]

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Will do for sure

#16 - rainclip

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uh oh

#13 - zimmermania

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Oh well, time to shoot up a wallmart and become a ghost girl.

#15 to #13 - asswad [OP]

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*Wolmart employee* <I'm going gost! >

#10 - staticstyke

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damn fire and lighting is on point dude , the way the light of the fire glows against her, you do perspective really good too! as well as color choice ^^

hands are my truest enemy when I draw (pic related, I drew it)

#11 to #10 - asswad [OP]

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Yo dude that looks amazing keep it you'll get better also hands are hard to do even for me so don't worry about that