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Ok, so i have been on fj for a looonnnggg time, and i figured i would share what im working on.
Let me know what you think.

Im looking for honest feedback here.

This is my first time posting my personal music.....be gentle..

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Submitted: 02/22/2013
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User avatar #3 - camperdude (02/22/2013) [+] (2 replies)
Well, as a long-time Dubstep fan, I will be honest.

I thumbed you up for the work you've put into this. But the drop is too quiet. Also, try adding some sub-bass in the background, it will add some atmosphere to your song.
Try to make these wobbles a little bit more "heavier"...

But overall, good start!
User avatar #2 - jonnyp (02/22/2013) [-]
not a big fan of dub step, but you got some pretty good talent for people that like that sort of stuff, i personally am not a big fan of the bass drops that make dub step, dub step, i like the more melodic bits. great job though!
User avatar #1 - breakurshit (02/22/2013) [-]
Holy **** , this is sick!
#8 - anonymous (02/23/2013) [-]
Agreeing with everyone about making dat drop louder. I like to poop a little during the drop.

Also, the drop looks like an alien lander from Stargate.
#7 - anonymous (02/23/2013) [-]
Drop is too light in my opinion :/ add more bass to it, make it heavier. The second/ end drops are fine being less heavy, but the start has to be strong to keep listeners in.
User avatar #6 - HenrikVIII (02/23/2013) [-]
More piano. Your outro was pretty awesome.
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