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#8 - but did the outfit work well? 07/25/2015 on Ashes,Ashes....We All Fall... 0
#32 - I wonder what it'd look like if someone shaved a tarantula.  [+] (1 new reply) 07/24/2015 on Tarantula 0
User avatar #33 - thesovereigngrave (07/24/2015) [-]
Probably like a regular non-shaggy spider.
#7054 - do some **** * 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
#7053 - Sweet! Thanks. It's always nice to have someone to give feedba…  [+] (2 new replies) 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
User avatar #7056 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Fucking stellar title, I'm betting it will fit just right with your novel. Talk to ya later.
User avatar #7054 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
do some shit*
#7049 - Only a week or two ago. Why do you ask?  [+] (4 new replies) 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
User avatar #7051 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Oh that's good! I thought you were procrastinating or just didn't have time to write. If you if ever want to post a chapter on FunnyJunk, or elsewhere, let me know. I would love to read it and even provide feedback if your looking for it.
User avatar #7053 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Sweet! Thanks. It's always nice to have someone to give feedback on my shit.
I've gotta fo some hit right now, so when I get back, I'll work on expanding the introduction, and if it still seems cliché, I'll work on a second idea for the intro.
As of right now, my working title is "The Eventuality: A Timeline of Terra Incognita". Opinions on if it'd sound catchy to the average person por favor
User avatar #7056 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Fucking stellar title, I'm betting it will fit just right with your novel. Talk to ya later.
User avatar #7054 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
do some shit*
#7047 - here it is Hey, I have a plan for a book series that…  [+] (6 new replies) 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
User avatar #7048 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
It sounds very interesting, unfortunately I haven't read nor seen the Game of Thrones series but FunnyJunks pretty much made me aware major characters die a lot . Depending on your schedule, try and devote at least half an hour a day. How long ago did you post this?
User avatar #7049 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Only a week or two ago. Why do you ask?
User avatar #7051 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Oh that's good! I thought you were procrastinating or just didn't have time to write. If you if ever want to post a chapter on FunnyJunk, or elsewhere, let me know. I would love to read it and even provide feedback if your looking for it.
User avatar #7053 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Sweet! Thanks. It's always nice to have someone to give feedback on my shit.
I've gotta fo some hit right now, so when I get back, I'll work on expanding the introduction, and if it still seems cliché, I'll work on a second idea for the intro.
As of right now, my working title is "The Eventuality: A Timeline of Terra Incognita". Opinions on if it'd sound catchy to the average person por favor
User avatar #7056 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Fucking stellar title, I'm betting it will fit just right with your novel. Talk to ya later.
User avatar #7054 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
do some shit*
#7046 - Yes, thanks! I've been aiming to get my ass on track to writin… 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
#7044 - Also, any opinions on this excerpt? "Sarah, com…  [+] (9 new replies) 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
User avatar #7045 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Very nice, you wrote it yourself? I would recommend writing your heart out first before making some serious revisions, making a few of them here and there, but overall just focus on writing what your feeling at the moment. After your first chapter if your writing a novel you can focus on making major revisions.

This excerpt, in my opinion, does sound a bit cliche, but that's okay! Again, what I would recommend is writing a bit more and seeing where it takes you in terms of your story, and then afterwards making revisions to better adjust this excerpt's message and meaning.
User avatar #7047 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
here it is
Hey, I have a plan for a book series that I'd be writing over the course of a good amount of years.

I'm going to condense the idea down real hard here.
Semi-Apocalyptic event happens, and the POV is you(the reader) just watching shit happens as history goes on.

It'd have some flavor of Game of Thrones - (Serious, ruthless to characters, and has many perspectives)
Major themes of this series is very Buddhistic - Everything changes, Entropy is a fact of the universe. And for shits and giggles, I'd add in some personalities or circumstances that would come in across time periods, cause of the the ideas that everything is a cycle
I'm asking if you people think it's original or if it's interesting, and if you think people in general would think it's fresh or interesting.

The timeline starts with life right after the semi-apocalyptic even, then starts to skip as life starts to change and change and change, and some points involve inner conflict, interpersonal exchanges, factions interaction/moving around/dying out, good things coming in, bad things going out, chaos, rebuilding, culture changing, language decaying, and other such stuff.

Also, it would definitely involve radiation. Not like fallout though. In many countries, nuclear reactors would degrade and break down, causing fallout in a certain radius around it. People then interacts, and shenanigans ensue. Unfortunately for people, that means lots of cancer.

Anyways, this'll span over some books.
User avatar #7048 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
It sounds very interesting, unfortunately I haven't read nor seen the Game of Thrones series but FunnyJunks pretty much made me aware major characters die a lot . Depending on your schedule, try and devote at least half an hour a day. How long ago did you post this?
User avatar #7049 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Only a week or two ago. Why do you ask?
User avatar #7051 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Oh that's good! I thought you were procrastinating or just didn't have time to write. If you if ever want to post a chapter on FunnyJunk, or elsewhere, let me know. I would love to read it and even provide feedback if your looking for it.
User avatar #7053 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Sweet! Thanks. It's always nice to have someone to give feedback on my shit.
I've gotta fo some hit right now, so when I get back, I'll work on expanding the introduction, and if it still seems cliché, I'll work on a second idea for the intro.
As of right now, my working title is "The Eventuality: A Timeline of Terra Incognita". Opinions on if it'd sound catchy to the average person por favor
User avatar #7056 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Fucking stellar title, I'm betting it will fit just right with your novel. Talk to ya later.
User avatar #7054 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
do some shit*
User avatar #7046 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Yes, thanks! I've been aiming to get my ass on track to writing this out as a series. I commented on this board a while ago about the overview, let me just see if I can find it.
#7041 - Can anyone provide a link to a website where I can do a run ov…  [+] (10 new replies) 07/24/2015 on /books/ board 0
User avatar #7044 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Also, any opinions on this excerpt?
"Sarah, come sit with me, so we can die together."

The asteroid had been predicted months prior.
The President of the United States had come out with very grave news. Earth would be hit. Lives would be lost. It was the first of many intense moments to come. First was the mass panic, as any other life threatening event would cause. Along followed the looting and hoarding. Third, swathes of people evacuating to other countries. And lastly, the gap made by all those migrant humans. Government services eventually shut down, grocery stores closed, ghost towns formed by the bushel. Unfortunately, there were stragglers. The hidden wallflowers in society, the odd backwoods naturalist, who chose to ignore society, the few homeless who weren't able to help themselves, and the disabled who had no family left to be brought with.

The main thing I want to know is if you guys enjoyed it got the addicting feeling you get from a good hook , and whether or not anything sounds unoriginal or cliché.
I'm going to continue on with the point of view of two homeless who weren't able to leave the country in time.
User avatar #7045 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Very nice, you wrote it yourself? I would recommend writing your heart out first before making some serious revisions, making a few of them here and there, but overall just focus on writing what your feeling at the moment. After your first chapter if your writing a novel you can focus on making major revisions.

This excerpt, in my opinion, does sound a bit cliche, but that's okay! Again, what I would recommend is writing a bit more and seeing where it takes you in terms of your story, and then afterwards making revisions to better adjust this excerpt's message and meaning.
User avatar #7047 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
here it is
Hey, I have a plan for a book series that I'd be writing over the course of a good amount of years.

I'm going to condense the idea down real hard here.
Semi-Apocalyptic event happens, and the POV is you(the reader) just watching shit happens as history goes on.

It'd have some flavor of Game of Thrones - (Serious, ruthless to characters, and has many perspectives)
Major themes of this series is very Buddhistic - Everything changes, Entropy is a fact of the universe. And for shits and giggles, I'd add in some personalities or circumstances that would come in across time periods, cause of the the ideas that everything is a cycle
I'm asking if you people think it's original or if it's interesting, and if you think people in general would think it's fresh or interesting.

The timeline starts with life right after the semi-apocalyptic even, then starts to skip as life starts to change and change and change, and some points involve inner conflict, interpersonal exchanges, factions interaction/moving around/dying out, good things coming in, bad things going out, chaos, rebuilding, culture changing, language decaying, and other such stuff.

Also, it would definitely involve radiation. Not like fallout though. In many countries, nuclear reactors would degrade and break down, causing fallout in a certain radius around it. People then interacts, and shenanigans ensue. Unfortunately for people, that means lots of cancer.

Anyways, this'll span over some books.
User avatar #7048 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
It sounds very interesting, unfortunately I haven't read nor seen the Game of Thrones series but FunnyJunks pretty much made me aware major characters die a lot . Depending on your schedule, try and devote at least half an hour a day. How long ago did you post this?
User avatar #7049 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Only a week or two ago. Why do you ask?
User avatar #7051 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Oh that's good! I thought you were procrastinating or just didn't have time to write. If you if ever want to post a chapter on FunnyJunk, or elsewhere, let me know. I would love to read it and even provide feedback if your looking for it.
User avatar #7053 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Sweet! Thanks. It's always nice to have someone to give feedback on my shit.
I've gotta fo some hit right now, so when I get back, I'll work on expanding the introduction, and if it still seems cliché, I'll work on a second idea for the intro.
As of right now, my working title is "The Eventuality: A Timeline of Terra Incognita". Opinions on if it'd sound catchy to the average person por favor
User avatar #7056 - niunep (07/24/2015) [-]
Fucking stellar title, I'm betting it will fit just right with your novel. Talk to ya later.
User avatar #7054 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
do some shit*
User avatar #7046 - supahsayin (07/24/2015) [-]
Yes, thanks! I've been aiming to get my ass on track to writing this out as a series. I commented on this board a while ago about the overview, let me just see if I can find it.
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