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#58 - Yeah, I totally get what you're saying. I'll probably have ano…  [+] (1 new reply) 12/11/2014 on See? TB gets it. 0
#59 - tehcritic (12/11/2014) [-]
Fair enough, good luck.
#49 - The paper was in the style of a cinematic criticism, on accoun…  [+] (3 new replies) 12/11/2014 on See? TB gets it. 0
#56 - tehcritic (12/11/2014) [-]
Yeah that could work for GLaDOS. I just put that in as a warning that some instructors can be real bastards when it comes to technicalities like that. It sounds like yours won't give you that sort of problem though. I see what you mean by including your own perspectives in a criticism piece. It would make more sense to use first person there than in other genres. But again, from what I've read your use of first person weakens the writing (note: I did not read the whole paper).

Refer to your intro paragraph. You have a sentence that begins: "To my understanding, the female characters in question..." This sentence gains nothing by including "To my understanding." It's redundant and unnecessary. Also, in the final sentence you write "Through these three characters, I intend to determine how the representation of women..." Instead, try "An analysis of these three characters will examine how the representation of women as antagonists in video games affectS the representation of the feminine identity/persona/etc. across the entire medium." Definitely go back and revise your paper. There are a lot of small mistakes in what otherwise looks like a well-put together and researched piece.
User avatar #58 - successfully (12/11/2014) [-]
Yeah, I totally get what you're saying. I'll probably have another look at it this weekend, right now I need to be studying for a calc final. Thanks a lot though.
#59 - tehcritic (12/11/2014) [-]
Fair enough, good luck.
#45 - Hey guys, I just wrote ~10 pages on female representation as a…  [+] (5 new replies) 12/11/2014 on See? TB gets it. +2
#48 - tehcritic (12/11/2014) [-]
Just a general comment: it looks like you're writing an argumentative essay. I.e.:pick a stance and argue it. Typically it's not a good idea to write in the first person for argumentative papers (and definitely don't use second person). It weakens your syntax and, by extension, your argument. In general, you can simply treat your arguments as facts (as long as you back them up with legitimate sources/citations) instead of prefacing each argument with "I think," or "In my opinion," etc. Also, using GLaDOS as an example of a female antagonist might be open to criticism since it is technically a machine with no gender. It depends on how strict your instructor will be, although if you're writing a paper on video game characters I'm guessing he or she will not be too harsh in that regard. Good luck, here's hoping you do well.
User avatar #49 - successfully (12/11/2014) [-]
The paper was in the style of a cinematic criticism, on account of it being for a cinema class. Surprisingly, these types of papers introduce and conclude themselves in first person, but I understand the dilemma. As far as GLaDOS is concerned, I rely heavily on the fact that she is the disembodies personality of Caroline, as well as the fact that her voice and mannerisms are feminine. Thank you for your time.
#56 - tehcritic (12/11/2014) [-]
Yeah that could work for GLaDOS. I just put that in as a warning that some instructors can be real bastards when it comes to technicalities like that. It sounds like yours won't give you that sort of problem though. I see what you mean by including your own perspectives in a criticism piece. It would make more sense to use first person there than in other genres. But again, from what I've read your use of first person weakens the writing (note: I did not read the whole paper).

Refer to your intro paragraph. You have a sentence that begins: "To my understanding, the female characters in question..." This sentence gains nothing by including "To my understanding." It's redundant and unnecessary. Also, in the final sentence you write "Through these three characters, I intend to determine how the representation of women..." Instead, try "An analysis of these three characters will examine how the representation of women as antagonists in video games affectS the representation of the feminine identity/persona/etc. across the entire medium." Definitely go back and revise your paper. There are a lot of small mistakes in what otherwise looks like a well-put together and researched piece.
User avatar #58 - successfully (12/11/2014) [-]
Yeah, I totally get what you're saying. I'll probably have another look at it this weekend, right now I need to be studying for a calc final. Thanks a lot though.
#59 - tehcritic (12/11/2014) [-]
Fair enough, good luck.
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You're like 1 or 2. I really never have much of a need for it.
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