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joshuaww

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Gender: male
Age: 24
Steam Profile: lthartblaze
Consoles Owned: PS1, N64, PS2, Xbox360, PS3, PS4, WiiU, various nintendo handhelds
Video Games Played: Ask
X-box Gamertag: JoshuaVv
PSN: SonderVv
Interests: Writing, horror, video games, critical discussion.
Date Signed Up:4/03/2012
Location:In the depth of my imagination
FunnyJunk Career Stats
Comment Ranking:#545
Highest Content Rank:#5991
Highest Comment Rank:#183
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Level 8 Content: New Here → Level 9 Content: New Here
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Level 330 Comments: Practically Famous → Level 331 Comments: Practically Famous
Subscribers:9
Content Views:18253
Times Content Favorited:4 times
Total Comments Made:31705
FJ Points:8635
Aspiring game critic. I have a very poor sense of humor, so I may be too serious too often.

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#1857960 - hell dear 04/24/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
#1857927 - all poetic 04/24/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
#1857923 - 1 is art 2 is fanfiction  [+] (3 new replies) 04/24/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
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#1857925 - queenchrysalis (04/24/2016) [-]
Do you know how long I spent fisting that boar
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#1857943 - medewu (04/24/2016) [-]
Not long enough because you're here.
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#1857927 - joshuaww (04/24/2016) [-]
all poetic
#1857919 - Yes. Happily. 04/24/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1857722 - I saw this one coming 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1857461 - nah i don't feel like putting up with it anymore right now 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1857457 - Alright I made my progress in Dark Souls III beat dancer…  [+] (2 new replies) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
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#1857459 - efgsoldier (04/23/2016) [-]
you beat decode ? Win the game
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#1857461 - joshuaww (04/23/2016) [-]
nah

i don't feel like putting up with it anymore right now
#1857455 - yeah, just sucks I can't live anime 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
#1857440 - I thought that, too but this isn't fma  [+] (2 new replies) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
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#1857447 - axxein (04/23/2016) [-]
Is doesn't need to be to be utility on a stick + bombs

That's typically what they are in anything non fma
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#1857455 - joshuaww (04/23/2016) [-]
yeah, just sucks I can't live anime
#1857435 - Stalker 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom +3
#1857362 - ah 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1857361 - Guts is pretty awesome, I have to admit. 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
#1857352 - do you enjoy that movie  [+] (2 new replies) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
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#1857356 - abyx (04/23/2016) [-]
I'm about to find out
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#1857362 - joshuaww (04/23/2016) [-]
ah
#1857193 - It might be tough at some spots since some parts of DaS2 can b… 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1857180 - firelink shrine music 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1857023 - why SFxT sucked anyway 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1 - What a pleasant surprise. 04/23/2016 on liar +2
#1855461 - protomen  [+] (1 new reply) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
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#1855466 - efgsoldier (04/23/2016) [-]
Light up the night is a good one
#1855349 - Yeah kinda midwestern. 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1855339 - Genuinely neat. I'm guessing those L/R things help i…  [+] (2 new replies) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
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#1855347 - frigidalt (04/23/2016) [-]
looks like its in an Amish type of setting
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#1855349 - joshuaww (04/23/2016) [-]
Yeah kinda midwestern.
#1855212 - We should add each other on more things and I can help when needed. 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom +1
#1855189 - why  [+] (1 new reply) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1855229 - larrallina (04/23/2016) [-]
#1855182 - One finger death punch  [+] (3 new replies) 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
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#1855187 - larrallina (04/23/2016) [-]
one finger up my ass if you think im getting that fucking game m8
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#1855189 - joshuaww (04/23/2016) [-]
why
#1855229 - larrallina (04/23/2016) [-]
#1854933 - ensure him my van is much better 04/23/2016 on FJ Backroom 0
#1 - Picture  [+] (3 new replies) 04/23/2016 on Cute +17
#10 - frostbitcanadian (04/23/2016) [-]
#8 - severepwner (04/23/2016) [-]
Damn, kid RWBY is adorable.
#2 - KevinPutt (04/23/2016) [-]
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#7540 - joshuaww
(04/13/2016) [-]
stickied by joshuaww
#7566 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/23/2016) [-]
RWBY is finished at last

Qrow is pretty neato
#7567 to #7566 - joshuaww
(05/24/2016) [-]
I'm home from out of town festivities so now I can respond.

Hi, Alex. And yes, Qrow is great. What'd you think of it otherwise? Other chars you liked? Gonna be seeing more? Have a waifu?
#7568 to #7567 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/24/2016) [-]
Yeahhhh I'll be watchin more

Ummmm lets see. I learned to like Ruby and most of the main characters. Jaune was one of my favs but he wasnt in s3 that much. The fight scene with the trumpet guy and chick on roller skates was my favorite mainly because of the music. Emeralds my waifu, but janey and els.anna think I have **** taste
#7569 to #7568 - joshuaww
(05/24/2016) [-]
I dislike Emerald on the basis she isn't much more aside from Plot Device the Character. It doesn't make any of the stuff the villains pulled off that clever, and makes you wonder if they could've done even dumber stuff with it. Her power seems incredibly over powered so I don't like her due to that. She really doesn't seem very interesting either.

But yeah, S3 neglected a lot of side chars, but I'm sure they'll make up for it in S4 considering the set-up.
#7570 to #7569 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/24/2016) [-]
tbh i just like her cuz mint chocolate chip

Everybodys DEAD
#7571 to #7570 - joshuaww
(05/24/2016) [-]
Nah. Not dead. Just kinda ****** in various ways.

Minus Pyrrha. She's ******* dead.
#7572 to #7571 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/24/2016) [-]
This pic is GAY
GAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
#7573 to #7572 - joshuaww
(05/24/2016) [-]
There's quite a few like that.
#7562 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/17/2016) [-]
You see Civil War yet?
#7563 to #7562 - joshuaww
(05/17/2016) [-]
Nope.
#7564 to #7563 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/17/2016) [-]
Why noooooot
#7565 to #7564 - joshuaww
(05/17/2016) [-]
I'd only go with friends, and I think they already saw it while I was busy with finals.

I'm not super interested in the marvelverse anymore so I probably won't until it's out for download and I'm pressured to watch it before the next marvel movie
#7558 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/10/2016) [-]
I've been feeling depressed the past month or so, and its been really getting to me. So I figured I'd let all my favorite people know how much they really mean to me

Josh, thanks for starting to talk to me more the past few months. I'm sorry I've been quiet lately, I've been in a huge slump from stress and the big move going on and I want to let you know that you still mean a great bunch to me as a friend
#7559 to #7558 - joshuaww
(05/10/2016) [-]
Happily. Was just thinking the other day how much I like hanging out with you. You're funny, and we have a fun chemistry. Our banter about the souls game is hilarious and fun. So it's a good time. You're a good time.

We'll call again soon I'm sure. With the group, too. Have some good ol' times. Summer's coming after all. Plenty of free time to kill together.
#7560 to #7559 - frigidalt ONLINE
(05/10/2016) [-]
btw post more Taokaka, yes
#7561 to #7560 - joshuaww
(05/10/2016) [-]
I just have some since he's paired a lot with Ragna. They're friends.
#7557 - larrallina
(05/08/2016) [-]
#7551 - babybeel
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#7553 to #7551 - joshuaww
(04/27/2016) [-]
A few things

You like to tangent a lot, and fluff your writing with a lot of metaphors. Your instincts are right in telling you that just saying things is boring, but sometimes you go too far in the other direction. Like the paragraph about the sun and the moon? It's nonsense. Maybe could work in another place or another piece, but in the context its in now, it's just nonsense.

There are times when you just need to reel yourself back, because the sentences become so long and the ideas so stretched out it can be easy to get lost. There's some good imagery and word usage here, it just needs to be broken up a bit more. It helps the audience process what you're trying to show. If you get too long winded or overly archaic with it, it starts to feel artificial and just as boring as just saying "it was sunrise."

There are moments, too, which I think you're too telling though. Like "the boy's face reddened from the insult," you don't need to say all of that. Just give the expression and reaction. It should be enough.

To give you an idea on how I felt while reading, I kinda said to myself "okay, something is finally happening" when they started calling about the invasion.

Some of the world building set-up is good, but some of it should be cut down or moved to other places. The best way to set up a world is to do it as the story goes on. After all, I won't give a **** about your world until there are things in it I care about- your characters. When more things happen and I'm more into their plight, then try and dip in more world building stuff. Doing it all upfront is a pretty Tolkien way to do it, and frankly **** him.

He builds an amazing world, but tells a boring story. You're here to tell a story in your world. So inform the reader as necessary when it's relevant, but in between keep it focused on characters and conflict.

But with that all said, I'm not suggesting cutting all the stuff out in the beginning, because it does well in some other things. It establishes tone, and slowly gets you immersed. I'd just encourage you to try and do this in a more active way. You told us about these tribes, how about seeing them a bit more in action before the actual action starts. Introduce characters, get the audience to know them and cozy with their environment. Then throw a wrench in things.

Anyway, with all of that said, these are obviously just suggestions. Take them or leave them.
#7554 to #7553 - babybeel
(04/27/2016) [-]
Thank ya man~
These are all really good points. I was worried I was being too over the top so I'm glad to get some advice on that. I'll take all this on board when editing.

Truly appreciate all this!
#7552 to #7551 - joshuaww
(04/27/2016) [-]
Anything you want me to look at in particular? Anything you want to highlight? And you want me to look at it all right?
#7541 - frigidalt ONLINE
(04/15/2016) [-]
So a lot of the game may be considered "fan service" but its pretty neat seeing how the world has actually changed
#7542 to #7541 - joshuaww
(04/15/2016) [-]
I'll say more once i beat it.
#7543 to #7542 - frigidalt ONLINE
(04/15/2016) [-]
How far are ya? I just reached Irithyll
#7544 to #7543 - joshuaww
(04/15/2016) [-]
Swamp
#7545 to #7544 - frigidalt ONLINE
(04/15/2016) [-]
Cmooooon, keep playiiiiiing, get fartherrrriphasihtsidzsdzsdgo
#7546 to #7545 - joshuaww
(04/15/2016) [-]
I'm literally playing right now.
#7547 to #7546 - frigidalt ONLINE
(04/15/2016) [-]
ya ya do it, ****** BEAT IT
#7548 to #7547 - joshuaww
(04/15/2016) [-]
I went through some earlier places again to look for stuff. So it's going slow.
#7549 to #7548 - frigidalt ONLINE
(04/15/2016) [-]
Make sure to explore the swamp area thoroughly, there's a split there
#7550 to #7549 - joshuaww
(04/15/2016) [-]
Alright
#7538 - KevinPutt
(04/11/2016) [-]
#7536 - larrallina
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#7529 - kelamith
(03/26/2016) [-]
hio
#7530 to #7529 - joshuaww
(03/27/2016) [-]
You called me while I was gone. I'm here now. Hi, Kel.
#7531 to #7530 - kelamith
(03/27/2016) [-]
Hiya!

Where were you away to?
#7532 to #7531 - joshuaww
(03/27/2016) [-]
I was gone this weekend. Hanging with friends. Doing things. Hanging out. You know. Typical social ****.

How's Kel, then? Needed something?
#7533 to #7532 - kelamith
(03/27/2016) [-]
GIF
How gross! Sounds fun though

Not really! I just booped a whole bunch of people and you were lucky enough to be in my mind at the time~
Though I'm fine enough. Blasting music way louder than I should, playing warframe, enjoying easter treats.

What about yourself?
#7534 to #7533 - joshuaww
(03/27/2016) [-]
Texting people while also waiting for dinner. Gonna be an hour or so still, but that's okay. I also have a very short paper to work on, but short and easy means I can procrastinate, so procrastinate I will. Just a bit anyway.
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