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#49 - whyisthishappening
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User avatar #50 to #49 - bonkboy
(07/16/2012) [-]
Hmm..this isn't bad but a few constructive criticisms.

1. Your eyes our uneven in their positioning. I know it may sound weird but when you draw your head base make two light perpendicular lines to draw your eyes within. Otherwise your eyes will look lopsided.

2. Unless this is a guy or flat chested girl, try to put a bit of detail on the torso to indicate a bust. Not a whole lot, just a little detail here and there.

User avatar #51 to #50 - whyisthishappening
(07/16/2012) [-]
Oh yeah, the eyes..Ive always had a problem with making things symmetrical.
And its a boy...technically. Its uberandrews character, Andrew. I tried to draw him more realistically, but I have a pretty cartoonish style.
I JUST got into drawing things, I'm more of a writer than an artist, but Ive gotten a bit better; thanks for the tip, Ill try that.
Also, his head is slightly tilted, so the lopsidedness...
#52 to #51 - bonkboy
(07/16/2012) [-]
I never really took that into account. *shrugs*
I never really took that into account. *shrugs*
User avatar #53 to #52 - whyisthishappening
(07/16/2012) [-]
Ahh, so what is your art?
#54 to #53 - bonkboy
(07/16/2012) [-]
This isn't one of my recent pieces, but its one of my prized artworks.
User avatar #55 to #54 - whyisthishappening
(07/16/2012) [-]
Kino? I think...Kinos journey?
User avatar #56 to #55 - bonkboy
(07/16/2012) [-]
No, this is the character Nitori Kawashiro from the game series Touhou
User avatar #57 to #56 - whyisthishappening
(07/16/2012) [-]
Ah, I see
Damn. Its really awesome.
User avatar #58 to #57 - bonkboy
(07/16/2012) [-]
It took me several years to get this good. If ya keep at you, can easily do this too.
User avatar #59 to #58 - whyisthishappening
(07/16/2012) [-]
yeah, thanks.
Artists are really patient, huh?
Maybe its not for me. I'm impatient enough with my writing as it is.