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#23 - You know what man add my skype, ill pm it to you. Im off from … 12/19/2014 on LessThanThreesOme's profile 0
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User avatar #1362 - LessThanThreesOme (12/08/2014) [-]
My photography page can be found here www.facebook.com/rykelstudios
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User avatar #73 - sjokolett (12/06/2014) [-]
mine are
Hansa Fatøl and Vikingfjord
#72 - ruckanucka (12/06/2014) [-]
A shot of Jamieson in a pint of Guinness. the ultimate Irishmans drink.. I call it the "Paddy-Whacker" Lol
Nah, I like Richards Red and Jack Daniels I suppose.
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User avatar #508 - daentraya (12/04/2014) [-]
Random snake person!
i prefer the random turtle guy tho.
pretty
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User avatar #136262 - awesomerninjathing (11/30/2014) [-]
like I said it can be in any form, be it 4 words a line or 10 or whatever

but here
genius.com/posts/1669-The-rapper-s-flow-encyclopedia
#136259 - It's not that its bad, its just I don't know the format of how…  [+] (4 new replies) 11/30/2014 on Music - new music, hip hop... 0
User avatar #136260 - awesomerninjathing (11/30/2014) [-]
well the thing is you're able to do whatever the fuck you want mainly because rap is so diverse and has the hipster subgenre and shit like that, so it doesn't have to really follow any "form"
User avatar #136266 - ferrettamer (11/30/2014) [-]
ayy lmao
User avatar #136261 - LessThanThreesOme (11/30/2014) [-]
What about the break down of it? Like Verses and Bars and such, I just need a credible source so i can learn how to put my creative shit into an enjoyable format.
User avatar #136262 - awesomerninjathing (11/30/2014) [-]
like I said it can be in any form, be it 4 words a line or 10 or whatever

but here
genius.com/posts/1669-The-rapper-s-flow-encyclopedia
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#21 - necroshredder (12/11/2014) [-]
sorry i havent talked with you in a long time college was a bitch but i got through. I have actually in some of my spare time have taken the liberty to edit my story and I think the origin story that I layed out is gonna need some refreshing cause I changed it up a good bit. also I finally have a good bit of the first four seasons in terms of the direction I have planned set in stone for the most part of it Im gonna say right now there is so much **** that I haven't told you yet it probably take me a long time to type it out but I could show you my notes if u want. I really dont know you as a person and what your daily life consist of and im assuming its busy so know that im thinking about it i dont feel comfortable to come out with demands like I said last time cause i feel like an ass. so you can do whatever floats your boat its just a rare opportunity to find someone to talk to about my story so in depth.
User avatar #23 to #21 - LessThanThreesOme (12/19/2014) [-]
You know what man add my skype, ill pm it to you. Im off from school for 3 weeks so I also wanna work on my story too and i don't mind helping you out. lets make it a reality.
#20 - LessThanThreesOme (11/18/2014) [-]
Who are you anon, no one comes here..
Who are you anon, no one comes here..
#3 - necroshredder (10/13/2014) [-]
so the story is a scifi fantasy, comedy in a way. just to give you an idea its like Guardians of the galaxy mixed with naruto and typical saturday cartoons

Ok so the story begins with a brief backstory about a darkness that has enslaved man. one day a random guy comes along to see a falling star that turns out to be an angel. man ask angel to help man and he does and destroys the darkness. pretty much its a battle that last a good bit. afterwards people are like thank you so much how can we repay you. angel replies saying theres no need you will repay me in time. just a really ambiguous message about future events what exactly is it not sure as of right now. then it explains how man goes through a golden age and various species from far away lands begin to migrate to the land of man kinda like immigrants coming to america. then conflicts happen ,nations are formed, major wars occur, then everyones tired of it so a peace treaty is formed and everyone just settles down.
thats a jist of the backstory now comes the beginning of the first issue after the explanation of backstory.starting setting is an evil fortress thats ruled by a very unimportant villain. a large group of human slaves are being escorted to the fortress by guys in suits of armor with whips. kinda typical slave cenario. Now we get an introduction to the main characters or some of the main cast, The main character Jeff (idk last name for him) has given up hope for everything (backstory will be explained later). pretty much just wants to go home and die rather than be a slave just really edgy at first. hes talking to some random guy at the same time villain is like "send them to the cells" or something like that and then a random slave steps out of line and is like NO and starts shouting stuff at him like why are you doing this, this is wrong, life should be treasured, stuff like that. villain retorts and goes on a long monologue about humans have no right to live nor does anybody else typical evil **** .
User avatar #7 to #3 - LessThanThreesOme (10/19/2014) [-]
Sorry for my lateness, but what I'm going to do is give you my input in each segments you posted your story in, so ill start (Sadly I haven't seen Guardins of the Galaxy so ill be pretty biased, if you have that type of idea, ill try to watch it later on and give you my input):

Okay so by the darkness, do you mean like overall darkness as actual darkness or darkness as in evil (Hell, Devil, Satan Corrupt officials etc)

The angel, you might need to go a bit more defined in the battle because hes a character you just introduced so like before he falls on Earth, have him saying a little monologue ( "The world is corrupt, humans are now on the brink of destruction, I need to do something" etc)

Just to define the random guy is Jeff right? Or if it isn't he has an importance in the story so incorporate him in the story, since he found the angel ( you can be like the angel took over that random guys body, so the angel and that random guy has there own story)

And for the Golden Age, you are incorporating the other species right? ( Reptilian, Mammalian, Aquatic etc) You should give a little indepth of how the species came around to live with Humans.

Are nations formed by race, wealth, land, prosperity or what? Are you gonna have race wars or stuff like that?

So the villian found Jeff talking to the other character and they went to the cells right?

As well one thing before I go to the next segments is that, when you bring characters into your story, even though they may not be main characters or what no, define them in what they do, their significance so the reader can later on put two and two together if your primary character has role in that significance.

Another thing is that your primary character should be worked on individual in chapters, so have the main guy with 1 chapter (since it will be the longest chapter, you can incorporate the 2nd character so their is growth in the group and you can see how they work together.)
#12 to #7 - necroshredder (10/20/2014) [-]
Ok so forgive me for excluding details there is still alot to go over and bear with me on this and im going to go over this. While reading your responses briefly I noticed that you do hit on points that were exactly the way I wanted but I will explain them chronologically.

The darkness in the story is actually the main villain (I have yet to come up with a set name for him but for right now we will call him Hellacroix). So the villain "hellacroix" is an all powerful demon that literally is an incarnation of evil ( there do exist other demons more powerful than him as the story progresses but that will be saved for another time). for the lore of the story he is actually hopping from different territories that are way way distant from where the story takes place and destroying civilizations.

The angels during this time have yet to arrive They do not arrive until when the main angel is discovered: Rothax. This guy is literally the closest thing to a god. as the story progresses he indirectly helps the main characters however and doesnt fight unless if it is absolutelly necessary. his design is inspired from a main character in a game called universe at war( the picture I posted).

At this moment man is in chaos Except for one city and that is Ionia. Ionia like I explained with sarah is a league of legendary tier magic users who were able to discover the knowledge of magic by unknown means( how hey find magic I do not know as of right now). they used the magic to suppress Hellacroixs' powers and minions and what not but was not efficient enough. when Rothax comes the random guy is actually the first Lightbringer( give me a moment). Rothax bestows the gift of light to this guy who was an ionian. the powers of light and magic are blended together to create an op as **** mixture. this light is actuallly just normal light but Rothax really shows him how he can do stuff with it. this eventually gets passed on to other ionians.
#14 to #12 - necroshredder (10/20/2014) [-]
So then the guy, Rothax and the angels that come later, and the ionians join together to fight hellacroix and is eventually killed by the guy. I think now looking at the message rothax leaves them is kinda pointless so ill scrap that idea for now. so then the darkness fades away and the as time goes on so does the practice of light. and then we get to the golden age

For this it can go in millions of directions for me so I have no idea how this is going to work but i wann encorporate a **** ton of stuff . but the idea that i stated already is just the jist of the general direction but for in depthness is going to need a lot of planning.

so we now get to the main story with jeff. they dont go into the cells they were in the process of going to the cells but were interrupted by the out spoken prisoner. However I will make jack fight but he really shows his skills when he fights the dragon ( which is actually a minion of Hellacroix). Imma continue in part 2
User avatar #13 to #12 - LessThanThreesOme (10/20/2014) [-]
Ahh I see, so therefore that main character is just a test to see if others should get the light? As well will he be the only going after the Hellacroix, also I would like you to read my story draft once its done if thats okay with you.

So Rothax is omnipotent right? Using the protatginist and his situation to see if its ideal?

Either way this story will be just as good, if your art style can go with it. Its pretty interesting.
#4 to #3 - necroshredder (10/13/2014) [-]
the arguement between the two is like the answer to jeffs problem

now at the same time that this argument between the random slave and the villan is happening there is a mercenary group in the fortress trying to kill the villain and save the prisoners. there is an upper level where just a random guy with a sniper rifle( spoilers he gets killed off immediatelly) is watching through the scope and another main character next to him is Frank. Frank is a kinda lizard sapien with hind legs and skin texture that reminds you of the elites from halo, and wearing blue armor. Frank wants to look through the scope but the sniper wont let him and they get into an argument. There are two random mercs kinda outside the building waiting to ambush when **** goes down. At the end of the villans monologue he says "and there is no one that can stop me". then suddenly a toilet flush sound happens everyones attention goes to the door that is on the left hand side of the villans throne (architecture of building is like that of your typical castle structure big door with a long wide hall with throne to the back. take dragonsreach in skyrim for example) suddenly door flies open with main character #3 gendy who is appart of the merc group. Gendy is a kinda dinosaur like creature I took inspiration of his appearance from groudon. In the scene he has headphones blasting music, playing on some portable system like a gameboy, shouting **** at the game. (suppose to be ******* hilarious) he pauses looks to his right and sees everyone looking at him. Turns off his music slowly and then hes like ****** u bitches lookin at. then the villans henchmen put all their spears to gendys throat. villain says something like you must be the most unintelligent being to be ever concieved. and he retorts with someting witty and that starts a kind short scene with them talking and making a funny scene.
User avatar #8 to #4 - LessThanThreesOme (10/19/2014) [-]
Alright part 2:

So the mercenary group has Frank in it right? Where the sniper is killed off, do these two have a connection prior ( close friends/work buddies/enemies etc). So you can use Frank and his emotions with that sniper and grab the readers attention.

So now you introduced both Frank and Gendy since they are in the merc group you can include both of them in this chapter with their own perspective (even better that they are a similar race)
Since Gendy is a "funny" charater you should make Frank a more serious and profound character ( mature one, so when tragedy hit between those two not so much the main character yet, you can they rely on their past and see how they work together [ Veteran/Rookie relationship, Father/Son relationship etc]

If this scene is a comedic scene, you should have the villain getting furious with all that **** between Gendy. uses Gendy's to test his patience.

One more thing this villian has his own nation or what? cause earlier you said nations were formed and **** went down right?
#15 to #8 - necroshredder (10/20/2014) [-]
Ok the sniper really has no connection to them they just hate each other from the get go. I do have designs for gendy and frank ( who were actually the first charactes i came up with) which i might post later. the two are not the same race. Gendys race is unknown at this point in the story but you learn that gendys race was killed by hellacroix. and his parents sent him of kinda yout typical lost survivor scenario where hes taken in by another race WHO is frank. so in a way they are like brothers to each other.

as for the villian hes is unimportant. he is literally there to set the story but he actually foreshadows the next villain and comes into play when that comes around. because what hes doing is hes providing him with sacrifices for a plan so he will "rule over everyone"( that is gonna come into play way down the line.) he controlls a province in a land no one gives a **** about Its just to show how pathetic he is.

go to part 3
#5 to #4 - necroshredder (10/13/2014) [-]
at the end genys trying to remember something like why he was there in the first place and he remembers and is like oh yeah im suppose to distract you. villans like what and gets shot through the neck. Franks like nice shot dude sarcastically and loud. dudes like shut up. the fight scene cominses gendys punching guards. random mercs come shooting guards retaliate. slaves both running and fighting. Jeff gets shot. mercs die except sniper. sniper, gendy and frank retreating through passageway jeff follows them. then introduced to character #4 Garry who is a robot with advanced artificial intelligence that makes him act human like. Garry is driving a van like vehicle where sniper, gendy, and frank get into while bitching at each other. jeff intrudes on the conversation grunting and bleeding out. they decide to bring him in the car. driving and bitching between gendy and frank how gendy ****** everything up and other dialogue happens sniper gets shot by a band of guards following the truck. sniper is dead now.

Setting changes to a city where we are introduced to character #5 sarah. she is a mage from a famous tribe of mages called the Ionians. the is now a thief making a living stealing precious items. character #6 is introduced as her adopted brother who was a soldier for one of the human armies. tries to covince her to stop doing bad things but fails

then police find them cause she stole valueable item. chase scene ensues and ends up both the two of them bumping into jeff and the gang that was being followed by the guards from the fortress. so we have the cast together. the city police trying to arrest sarah, and the fortress guards wanting to kill them. from what seems to be a fight bout to erupt suddenly there is a loud roar. a big black ******* dragon comes down on top of one of the buildings and breathes fire on all the soldiers but the cast manages to dodge it. dragon starts obliterating the city. police try to take it down but nothing works.
User avatar #9 to #5 - LessThanThreesOme (10/19/2014) [-]
Part 3:

So at this time Gendy is the one distracting them, is Jeff there to just watch this **** ? Since Jeff, from the looks like it a depressed or emotional character, you can just have him with a shocked face like Wtf is going on or just blank reaction.

When Jeff gets shot, you should have the sniper or Gendy or Frank to come up to him and help him get out, so you will see which character works well with Jeff.

So reading this again, you can see that Gendy and Frank has a professional vs amateur relationship regarding their work when Garry the robot is driving. You should have Garry as a self conceited narcissistic person, since hes human like. Give him the traits that what most humans would react to, kindness, love, hate, anger ( Gotta get by robo dick on/ KILLL ALL HUUUM- love all humans) Give him that robotic yet extra push of humanity, since you have a depressed ****** Jeff, gendy a "kid", Frank the serious one , and the bot.

Now for Sarah and theif let them have their own story, so be like "Meanwhile" or something like that as the 4 other characters prior are trying to get away. Then have them meet up with their problems yelling and cussing and **** like that. Now Since you introduced a female character, you have the "love at first sight" or either " Sarah's pushy attitude strong willed ( I may be a girl but I can do more against you guys) crap like that.

Now the dragon confuses me, so you can be like at the beginning explaing how mythlogical creatures and **** like that came around so the world has the fanatasy life living with modernized characteristics. So would the dragon be considered a wild animal like a bear, lion, cougar, or what not?
#16 to #9 - necroshredder (10/20/2014) [-]
yeah jeff is just watching it go down right now since hes undergoing an epiphany during the prisoners speech.

the relationship between all three of those characters is exactly how i pictured it. but I do have ideas where frank is kinda in between but he doesnt do like ridiculously stupid stuff but funny regardless.

however jeff gets over his depression really quickly as he gets in tune with these characters and he is not consistently depressed but his backstory will come into play later down the line. how that goes out i will have to figure that out.

now the guy character is not named thief ( prob bad wording on my part) sarah takes on the roles as a thief and has magical properties since she is an ionian. sarah as a character is very tough and just a bad bitch overall. also she tortures(or more specifically beats the **** out of)gendy and frank when they do something outrageously stupid. in terms of a love relation is something i am very conflicted about. one one hand it weakens her as a character in my eyes and on the other it really is something i want to happen to show how these characters are so connected.

now the dragon as i explained earlier is just a minion to hellacroix. Its only meant to establish his pressence in the world.

move to final part
#6 to #5 - necroshredder (10/13/2014) [-]
note: there probably should be some fighting wth them together against police but not going so sweet just for character development reasons.

Then it eventually turns into the cast working together to take down the dragon. dragon appears to be winning but jeff starts glowing and **** and fires a light spear at the dragon and gets instantly killed. then jeff gets an incripted vision from the dragon of the main villan of the series who is that embodiement of darkness that the angel fought. immediately the six of them get teleported to what appears to be heaven and the angel from the backstory talks to them about it now being their responiblity to take on the darkness kinda typical stuff and then they get a bas of opperations that is on an island in the middle of the most dangerous ocean. they can teleport from place to place now. thats pretty much the start of the whole thing there are more ideas i havent shared yet but im tired and im taking a break from typing so much and raping my brain
#11 to #6 - LessThanThreesOme (10/19/2014) [-]
Part 4:

So there is fighting between the group itself like Why are you bringing these guys (Fortress guards vs the Police) or are they fighting with the police?

So then Jeff has a special connection to the dragons, so Im guessing the dragons are a Godly animal so therefore, from what Im reading is that Jeff has more of an importance with the Godly (Heaven/Hell/Spiritual World)? If so definitely use Sarah who is a mage with this, they will work extremely well.

Ah I see so the angel now comes around, and gives them their "mission". So you should have Jeff, since hes a "Negative nancy" let him use the darkness to his advantage with the help of the light (Aka Angel)

So far from what I read its pretty good story idea, definately a comic series for sure. Just don't jump around with the character indepthness, cause you would want to know a little bit of each character of their trait and then later in the chapters or whatever have them go defined.
10/10 would help and read again.
#17 to #11 - necroshredder (10/20/2014) [-]
sorry for my poor use of words in this situation. there is going to be emotional conflicts between these new characters when they join. Jeff brings them together to work as a team or attempts at first but is interrupted by the dragon. now for the reasons the police and the guards are preping for a fight its simply that the guards are just evil guys and the police notice that. now I for this scen before the dragon appears Im not sure how the ranting is going to be organized but either that the group is fighting between themselves while the guards and police are preping a fight to show a parallel. or have them all trashtalking to each other in one big arguement. then after all of that dragon shows up scorches the guards and most of the police. with survivors or have no survivors for an upcoming scene i want to encorporate actually because i forgot to introduce a main character. billy.

billy is a mass of ooze that is literally stupid by all accounts kinda like caboose from red vs blue. he is located at the fortress which is one of the reasons why the mercenary group was there. billy was captured by the villain( im not sue how yet) Gendy and frank picked up the job by coincidence and i think i should get in depth with that later for a lack of explanation. but during the fight billy escapes and follows the Gendy and the rest after **** goes down.

now fast fowarding to after the dragon is killed It is killed by jeff with light. because it is revealed that jeff is a lightbringer but that idea is not introduced til they are brought to Rothax. The police come after the scene and imprision the group. some stuff happens and then billy come to help them. during their escape then they get teleorted to wher the angels are

I really appreciate you reading and responding to my stuff imma add on later with more stuff but right now i have got to focus on school. i will respond to you as soon as I can
User avatar #18 to #17 - LessThanThreesOme (10/20/2014) [-]
No problem man, its good **** . Ill show you my layout of my comic/story draft so you can get an idea of how to set it up. Good luck with your school, just message me whenever.
#19 to #18 - necroshredder (10/20/2014) [-]
Ok good that would be really nice. It would be appreciative (just when you feel like it) try to fill in the blanks of stuff that I just didnt really have ideas for or just dialogue like the arguements that take place like gendy and the villain( i do have dialogue for this but imma post them later on, bear with me). I have alot of ideas pass this Ill post them later but they are just stuff like general guidline of seasons, filler, character archetypes, etc. Im gonna make pictures to show you what the characters will look like. I do have pictures but The designs kinda shift and im trying to find the perfect design for example gendy is one I have trouble with the most. but anyway Id like for starters just focus on dialogue for this particular part just to start things off a bit and I can steam roll from there.
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