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Taco Hell 2

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Submitted: 04/16/2013
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#1 - Spikeydeath (04/16/2013) [-]
Finished the story for you ********
User avatar #2 to #1 - grimfuck ONLINE (04/16/2013) [-]
I love you...

I coulda waited didnt need to mess your timeing
#3 to #2 - Spikeydeath (04/16/2013) [-]
AH its fine, I like pleasing fans :D
#25 - John Cena (05/12/2013) [-]
That's pretty damn good material, but if you want to compete with McDisasters, you need:

1- Stories should have a beginning and an end. This story is just the end of Part 1.
2- Use a larger font. It's easier if you use an image, cuz u can play with whatever fonts your computer has and with color.
3- Try using funny nicknames and cursing at the trouble-makers; add some more feeling to the story. i.e.: Instead of Joe, use Jose Fattytits Sanchez or some **** ... FJers don't seem to like names too much.
4- Add memes or internet lingo wherever possible, it adds flavor.

User avatar #4 - grimfuck ONLINE (04/16/2013) [-]
Dude **** Joe! did he atleast call for help!
#5 to #4 - Spikeydeath (04/16/2013) [-]
No we laid there for 30 minutes, until someone complained to the gm about waiting for food and she came in to chew us out.
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