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User avatar #5 - captainislam (02/03/2013) [+] (4 replies)
pretty good i liked it a solid 8/10 and i rate things harsh. i don't have any tips for making it better though. but keep at it you seem to have the gift of words.
#1 - anonymous (02/03/2013) [+] (3 replies)
FJ is not your ******* English teacher.

0/10, not even funny, wasted my time and I couldn't fap to it.
#2 to #1 - xaxoz (02/03/2013) [-]
Im not asking you to check my grammar or anything, I am simply sharing my creation and stating that i would like some criticism, but hey, its a free world, do what you want mate :)
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