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User avatar #5 - captainislam (02/03/2013) [-]
pretty good i liked it a solid 8/10 and i rate things harsh. i don't have any tips for making it better though. but keep at it you seem to have the gift of words.
#6 to #5 - xaxoz [OP](02/03/2013) [-]
Thanks man! Much love! I think I finally found my hobby
User avatar #7 to #6 - captainislam (02/03/2013) [-]
good on you man. You can friend me if you want i would like to be kept up to date if you post any more of your work.
#8 to #7 - xaxoz [OP](02/03/2013) [-]
And it is done! I have no idea when im gonna post again but I am sure that it will happen at some point in time
User avatar #9 to #8 - captainislam (02/03/2013) [-]
good to hear
#1 - anon (02/03/2013) [-]
FJ is not your ******* English teacher.

0/10, not even funny, wasted my time and I couldn't fap to it.
#2 to #1 - xaxoz [OP](02/03/2013) [-]
Im not asking you to check my grammar or anything, I am simply sharing my creation and stating that i would like some criticism, but hey, its a free world, do what you want mate :)
User avatar #3 to #2 - illshowyouletters (02/03/2013) [-]
Remember, he's an anonfag. I think its good. I got feels. I feel exactly how the main char feels. That's the sign of a good story, when the author perfectly captures one of the human emotions.
#4 to #3 - xaxoz [OP](02/03/2013) [-]
Thanks man, I appreciate that very much! I wrote this because the episode i mention in the begining happend to me this friday :)
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