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A poem i made

 
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Views: 2377 Submitted: 09/10/2012
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#10 - kanatana
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(09/10/2012) [-]
Oh, baby, this is good.
#9 - dadadadavis
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(09/10/2012) [-]
Oorah Devil Dog. Keep your eyes open and head low. Semper Fi.
#6 - goberzerk
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(09/10/2012) [-]
this is just amazing
#1 - theohzie
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(09/10/2012) [-]
This isn's "funny," but it isn't "junk," so I'll thumb it up
#2 to #1 - DjRook [OP]
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(09/10/2012) [-]
Thanks and yeah i know it's not funny but i'm heading off to deployment next week monday and i've got a lot on my mind. just wanted to share this poem.
#4 to #2 - theohzie
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(09/10/2012) [-]
It's seriously a good poem, and I hope everything turns out alright!
#3 - ZeGerman
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(09/10/2012) [-]
Is it wrong that i imagined this being mumbled by a redneck to a random hillibilly tune?
#5 to #3 - DjRook [OP]
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(09/10/2012) [-]
well i'm not american so you can be sure it's not in a redneck accent. Filipino/spanish here.
#7 to #5 - ZeGerman
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(09/10/2012) [-]
It would fit though. You'd have been a god among propaganda poets during the great wars. Blabla oh it's hard to go to war blabla BUT when i meet "the enemy" i'll shoot him right away blabla. If it's such an emotional torment for you to go to war, just stay at home man!
#8 to #7 - DjRook [OP]
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(09/10/2012) [-]
haha nah i like what i do, even if it's nerve wracking at times. I'll get over it, i just need distractions such as making poems.