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#1 - guitarguise
Reply +105
(05/12/2013) [-]
that's actually a pretty nice story. Not exciting, but pleasant.
#5 to #1 - reigndrac
Reply +17
(05/12/2013) [-]
From what i've heard, it's probably also better than the original.
#42 to #5 - WtfStrawberries
Reply -3
(05/13/2013) [-]
the original has sex.
it may have been badly written, but you cant exactly have high standards for porn related things in how well written they are or how much the plot makes sense.