Short story. . My students are writing short stories. This is what I got from one of them. Short story My students are writing short stories This is what I got from one of them
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#19 - riarden
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#148 to #19 - anon
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couldn't even spring for removing the watermark could you faggot?
#150 to #148 - yourlifeisalie
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#23 to #19 - baconfattie ONLINE
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One brave motha *****
#151 to #23 - thalfak
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You just know you're going to get thumbed down when you post negative on top comments
#154 to #151 - thalfak
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See?
#37 - powerlevel
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I liked the part where we he stood up.
I felt that the character could have more development though.

9/10. Would read again
#142 to #37 - christopherdolan
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yea, agreed, more character development, but the major twist at the end saved it
#49 to #37 - paladinhunt
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#20 - wormy **User deleted account**
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#90 to #20 - elcreepo ONLINE
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Is it an A paper?

Suddenly it's everyone's.
#22 to #20 - Lolzster
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His name is Bo. It's cut off, but it's on the right side of the paper.
#44 - itsmypenis **User deleted account**
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#117 to #44 - mishaestrin
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I'm hearing Will Ferrel's voice as I read this.
#56 - spaceturtlecadet
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#138 to #56 - professionalfeeder
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where is that from?
where is that from?
#140 to #138 - spaceturtlecadet
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Some post on front page a few months ago. Someone captioned it.
#149 to #140 - professionalfeeder
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and looks like someone replied to my comment :D
#4 - fleshlight
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Could someone explain that **** to me?
#17 to #4 - tokenblaqguy
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The title of this short story is "the real slim shady" and the story is
He stood up.

so its a lead off of the song, he finally stood up and that's the End of this short story.. get it? (pic unrelated)
#5 to #4 - WinnerofTheGame
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Well, unless you're the Real Slim Shady, there's nothing to get.
#6 to #5 - fleshlight
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Well They're reffering to "Can the real Slim Shady please stand up?" And the conclusion of this is that he stood up? and that's that? Why was this funny?
#7 to #6 - WinnerofTheGame
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It's part of a song.
#8 to #7 - fleshlight
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I'm aware of that, if u diddnt notice I put out the whole sentence and not only what was written, and therefor I ask was that the joke? and how was it funny? :O
#14 to #8 - Cobaltsushi
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BECAUSE DIFFERENT PEOPLE LAUGH AT DIFFERENT STUPID THINGS!
#18 to #8 - wormy **User deleted account**
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#29 to #8 - rrocketninjas
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it also says "short story" so the student made it a very short story by simply stating that Slim Shady stood up. Of course, its no longer funny to you because it had to be totally spelled out for you...
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#3 - forsakendragon
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Best A+ ever.
#82 - rustyspunktube
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#71 - rieskimo
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(01/12/2013) [-]
The Pawnee Rangers Handbook.
#72 to #71 - rieskimo
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#34 - frienderman
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#38 to #34 - resbiansrock
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