Short story. . My students are writing short stories. This is what I got from one of them.
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User avatar #37 - powerlevel (01/12/2013) [-]
I liked the part where we he stood up.
I felt that the character could have more development though.

9/10. Would read again
User avatar #142 to #37 - christopherdolan (01/12/2013) [-]
yea, agreed, more character development, but the major twist at the end saved it
#56 - spaceturtlecadet ONLINE (01/12/2013) [-]
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#138 to #56 - professionalfeeder (01/12/2013) [-]
where is that from?
where is that from?
User avatar #140 to #138 - spaceturtlecadet ONLINE (01/12/2013) [-]
Some post on front page a few months ago. Someone captioned it.
User avatar #149 to #140 - professionalfeeder (01/12/2013) [-]
and looks like someone replied to my comment :D
#148 to #19 - anon (01/12/2013) [-]
couldn't even spring for removing the watermark could you faggot?
#23 to #19 - baconfattie (01/12/2013) [-]
One brave motha *****
User avatar #151 to #23 - thalfak (01/13/2013) [-]
You just know you're going to get thumbed down when you post negative on top comments
User avatar #154 to #151 - thalfak (01/13/2013) [-]
See?
#3 - forsakendragon (01/12/2013) [-]
Best A+ ever.
+80
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User avatar #90 to #20 - elcreepo (01/12/2013) [-]
Is it an A paper?

Suddenly it's everyone's.
User avatar #22 to #20 - Lolzster (01/12/2013) [-]
His name is Bo. It's cut off, but it's on the right side of the paper.
User avatar #86 - occamsrazor (01/12/2013) [-]
GIVE THIS CHILD AN A
#94 to #86 - anon (01/12/2013) [-]
L.
#76 - odio (01/12/2013) [-]
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#71 - rieskimo (01/12/2013) [-]
The Pawnee Rangers Handbook.
#95 - effort (01/12/2013) [-]
**effort rolled a random image posted in comment #74 at Look who I found **
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User avatar #117 to #44 - mishaestrin (01/12/2013) [-]
I'm hearing Will Ferrel's voice as I read this.
#15 - anon (01/12/2013) [-]
tl;dr
#155 to #78 - terowrath **User deleted account** (01/14/2013) [-]
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#108 to #78 - thebigcountry ONLINE (01/12/2013) [-]




Just kidding it's like one sentence
User avatar #113 to #108 - dsgbiohazard (01/12/2013) [-]
THE PIXELS, THEY BUUUUURN!!!
#122 to #113 - thebigcountry ONLINE (01/12/2013) [-]
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#82 - rustyspunktube (01/12/2013) [-]
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#31 - felixjarl ONLINE (01/12/2013) [-]
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