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User avatar #170 - lovestruckderpy (01/06/2013) [-]
His beard looks like the star wars rebel alliance symbol!
#171 to #170 - adventurefics **User deleted account** (01/06/2013) [-]
if me and anaon don't get thumbs, you don't get thumbs ****** . I hate mothers like ******* you. faggot. I bet ur no egorsptor i will ******* vent your dirty vagina you gly brony vile.
#187 to #171 - renamon (01/06/2013) [-]
Are you, mad?
Are you, mad?
#200 to #187 - diegotan (01/06/2013) [-]
I'm not, because I like ponies.
I'm not, because I like ponies.
User avatar #181 to #171 - thebestofmurder (01/06/2013) [-]
Where the **** did THAT come from?
User avatar #174 to #171 - lovestruckderpy (01/06/2013) [-]
Oh... ok!
#176 to #174 - adventurefics **User deleted account** (01/06/2013) [-]
First Class, yo, this is bad! Drippin'
Semen out of my gaping ass... Is
This what the people of Dick Butt live like?
Hmmm... A dick in my butt!~
User avatar #178 to #176 - lovestruckderpy (01/06/2013) [-]
Was that a poem about... funnyjunk?

It had nice rhythm, but... it's too blunt. You have a lot of under poem going on. Maybe more metaphor and simile use? Because, even if you use 'a dick in my butt' to try and illustrate the... feeling of what it's like to... be like a person of Dick Butt(no idea what this means, ahaha...) it's after you already imply really having a penis in your bum. And so it's just redundant and doesn't hit as hard!

Try less vulgar stuff, it might hit a bit harder, because besides the already established stuff, it's hard to take seriously.

That is... if you want anyway. I'm no poet, and that's just my opinion a-and I'm not trying to say it's bad, I just want to... help... is all...

#182 to #178 - androiddxx (01/06/2013) [-]
That was 			*******		 glorious and I love you.
That was ******* glorious and I love you.
User avatar #186 to #182 - lovestruckderpy (01/06/2013) [-]
Oh! Thank you!

I'd post a picture to show my appreciated... but... I can't. I'm sorry.

But I do appreciate, it! Really! Thank you!
#188 to #186 - androiddxx (01/06/2013) [-]
You're welcome.
User avatar #173 to #171 - damnusername (01/06/2013) [-]
dafuq was that about?
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