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#170 - lovestruckderpy
Reply +15
(01/06/2013) [-]
His beard looks like the star wars rebel alliance symbol!
#171 to #170 - adventurefics **User deleted account**
Reply -28
(01/06/2013) [-]
if me and anaon don't get thumbs, you don't get thumbs ******. I hate mothers like ******* you. faggot. I bet ur no egorsptor i will ******* vent your dirty vagina you gly brony vile.
#187 to #171 - renamon
Reply +2
(01/06/2013) [-]
Are you, mad?
Are you, mad?
#200 to #187 - diegotan
Reply 0
(01/06/2013) [-]
I'm not, because I like ponies.
I'm not, because I like ponies.
#181 to #171 - thebestofmurder
Reply +2
(01/06/2013) [-]
Where the **** did THAT come from?
#174 to #171 - lovestruckderpy
Reply +9
(01/06/2013) [-]
Oh... ok!
#176 to #174 - adventurefics **User deleted account**
Reply -12
(01/06/2013) [-]
First Class, yo, this is bad! Drippin'
Semen out of my gaping ass... Is
This what the people of Dick Butt live like?
Hmmm... A dick in my butt!~
#178 to #176 - lovestruckderpy
Reply +6
(01/06/2013) [-]
Was that a poem about... funnyjunk?

It had nice rhythm, but... it's too blunt. You have a lot of under poem going on. Maybe more metaphor and simile use? Because, even if you use 'a dick in my butt' to try and illustrate the... feeling of what it's like to... be like a person of Dick Butt(no idea what this means, ahaha...) it's after you already imply really having a penis in your bum. And so it's just redundant and doesn't hit as hard!

Try less vulgar stuff, it might hit a bit harder, because besides the already established stuff, it's hard to take seriously.

That is... if you want anyway. I'm no poet, and that's just my opinion a-and I'm not trying to say it's bad, I just want to... help... is all...

sorry.
#182 to #178 - androiddxx
Reply 0
(01/06/2013) [-]
That was ******* glorious and I love you.
That was ******* glorious and I love you.
#186 to #182 - lovestruckderpy
Reply +1
(01/06/2013) [-]
Oh! Thank you!

I'd post a picture to show my appreciated... but... I can't. I'm sorry.

But I do appreciate, it! Really! Thank you!
#188 to #186 - androiddxx
Reply +5
(01/06/2013) [-]
You're welcome.
#173 to #171 - damnusername
Reply +3
(01/06/2013) [-]
dafuq was that about?