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OB's Story pt 5. -ENLARGE- This is the 5th installment but certainly not the last ;) Please rate /10 in comments for others! Part 1: /channel/morbid-channel/OB+

-ENLARGE- This is the 5th installment but certainly not the last ;) Please rate /10 in comments for others!
Part 1: /channel/morbid-channel/OB+s+Story+pt+1/gyhTGtl
Part 2: /channel/morbid-channel/OB+s+Story+pt+2/aMjTGnZ/
Part 3: /channel/morbid-channel/OB+s+Story+pt+3/iMlTGvZ/
Part 4: /channel/morbid-channel/OB+s+Story+pt+4/tinTGgv/
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Day 251
We survived. Jess was there on the noor. Just sitting there g to be
mauled try those horrible things. I couldn' t let us die, not alter how Far we' gotten.
We' re only about a hundred miles From where that camp is.
I didn' t keep count but there were more than I thought. I only had a Few
rounds For that shotgun though so killing all oi them was quite a Feat N say.
The First ones busted through the window and crawled in. I was able to shoot the
First in the head. His head exploded into a million pieces with Brain matter all over the
wall. Jess didn' t even blink at the Fact she had some on her. She must' been in a
really bad place. I tried to shoot the second one but I missed with the shot. He was
able to swing at me but I him with the butt of the gun in his head. I rammed his head
into the wall and crushed it as hard as I could. He Just fell to the ground and slumped over.
Jess was still Just sitting there and I started to worry that I couldn' t take them all on
myself. The door hit the Hour no more than 3 seconds artery crushed the East one' s
head. 2 or them came into the door and one busted out the other window. I took the
Barrel or the gun and raised it the best I could in the short time I had. I took a shot
and blew the heads all of the 2 that came in the door with it. I saved myself some
ammo with that so I swung the Barrel of the gun at the one that came in the other
window. His head rolled on of his body. I couldn' t believe It hit the Hour and
shattered. I ripped on his arm and cracked the next one that came through the door
in the head with it. t snapped in hall so I held the shotgun up and shot through 3 of
them that were the door again.
one more came through each window when I did though. one of them grabbed Jess
bedore I noticed. I took the butt of the gun and swung it at the chest or the one that
came through the Eeit window. It hit him square and knocked him back at the wall. I
took the Barrel of the gun and put it straight through his head between his eyes. I
saw that the other one had grabbed Jess while I killed the East. I took my shotgun
and I put it right onto his lace bedore shooting sol rdn' t hit Jess. I blew his dead
s all over the cabin and all over us too. Jess Just lento the floor so I decided to
n h the job.
I Booked back at the door and bedore I knew it there were only 2 of those wretched
things Eeit. I threw my leg up at one of them and kicked him back at the wall. I
swung the butt or the gun as hard as I could at the other one as I turned around. I hit
him so hard in the chest that I cracked it and his right hall just hung all or his body.
He swung at me with his good arm and he hit me in the head. next thing I knew they
were dead and I was waking up this morning.
I asked Jess what happened and she told me that she couldn' t Just let me get mauled
on the floor so she grabbed her knife and cut the last half of that thing oil and took
off his head. She told me that she saved one of them though.
I can' t stop staring at him. she must' cut his arms and Eegs on. I knew there was a
rope hanging on of the wall near the small Fireplace but I never thought of doing that.
It' s crazy. she tied him up with his head and torso sitting on the noor in the comer. I
can' t help but think what would have happened if she hadn' t gotten up.
Testjust told me that she Eeit him For me to kill. she s itt she didn' t so that I
could get the East one. I guess it makes sense since I all of the k rig bedore that.
she says she didn' t want to take that victory away From me so I get to shoot him.
I did it. I couldn' t Kisten to that thing' s Jaws slapping together. All I could hear was his
teeth cracking nst each other making that awful sound. It was driving me insane.
I had to do it but I wanted to be as quick as possible so we could Just Ieave. I need to
get out of here bedore the smell of m g Brain matter and nest, make me any more
sick. I Just took my shotgun and pointed it at his chest. I shot him but he didn' t die. I
shourd' known try him not breating that that wouldn' t do much. so I took up the
Barrel aga n and I blew his skull apart. The buckshot shattered his head and the
almost liquid Brain that it spilled all over the walls and floor near him.
we' re leaving now and I can' t wait to get to Nevada. I am going to need a rest aider all
of this. That and Jess needs something for the massive gash on her Eeit Ieg.
Day 254
we can' t Fatt a pharmacy anywhere and I' m getting tired oi wandering through the hot
dry desert. It' s not too Fun when there are those monsters through every Kittie town
you get into. The survivors that have been this way must' taken almost everything
because we can' t Fatt any land anywhere. The water supply here is good though. The
towns must have had a huge reservoir because we were able to Fill all of our betties
up and have our day' s drinks.
Jess' leg looks the same as it was when it was injured. It' s not getting any better so
we need to find something to put on it soon. we' wrapped it up as best we can [or
now but it' s only a matter of time bedore it gets too infected and I lose another Mend.
Jess says that she will be line and that we need to Just get to that town, which is
about so miles out right now, but I don' t know.
Day 256
This is bad. I woke up and aound Jess hunched over a small pool or vomit. she' d been
puking all night East night and it' s only getting worse. I think her leg might be infected.
she is a Kittie pale and not so quick to look at me with a snooty look.
we are only about 20 miles From the camp so I hope we can get there in time to make
sure she' s okay. we have about 3 day' s load Eeit and enough water to East us until we
make it to the camp. we reached "Welcome to Nevada" signs about 2 hours ago and we' re
resting now. Things are looking up [or when we reach that camp. It will be a sight for sore
eyes, that' s For sure.
Day 257
Jess is starting to grow on me a Kittie more. she' s not as bad as she was. Although she' s
sick I still think she' s Funny and has a better attitude than she did. AND she still kicks ass.
we got attacked this morning Just bedore sunrise.
Jess took one or their heads and ripped it on try the hair. I' never seen anything quite
Iike that bedore. she took that head and she threw it into another' s head. They both
exploded with mush and neing skuid shrapnel. she cut through the third' s throat and
through the back of his neck. His head hit the ground and shattered. she kicked his body
into the tth one. The immage fell over and was getting up as Jess jumped and Banded on
her head. Her skuid was crushed and the liquid goo sprayed me all over.
I think I like this girl more than I thought.
Day 258
we' re only about 9 miles irom the camp now. It' s dark sawe stopped For the night.
we Just rotated watch. I woke Jess up and now she' s Just sitting out there with her knife
on her lap. I can see her From our makeshift tent we made From the bedsheets we aound
in the cabin.
Her leg Booked horrible when I woke her up. It was extremely red and it had blue streaks
exten rig outward From the gash. I' never seen a bite up close, so I am not sure if that' s
what r Is, but it doesn' t look Iike any infection that I' ever seen. she didn' t want to get up
which s strange For Jess. Ever since we' been trav g together she' s been up Just
bedore N come in to wake her. she woke up and immedeately went outside and threw up.
Thank God that camp is close now.
she' s Just sitting out there, rocking slightly back and Fourth. I think she' s trying to keep
herseys awake.
I' m afraid to go to sinep. I don' t think Jess is going to be okay tonight.
More?
TO BE CONTINUED
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#60 - skratch (05/22/2012) [-]
Mfw I see a new part of this story...
Mfw I see a new part of this story...
User avatar #251 to #222 - anonymaws (05/23/2012) [-]
OB I STILL LUB YO
User avatar #256 to #251 - theoriginalbastard (05/23/2012) [-]
OB still LUBs YOU too ;)
User avatar #257 to #256 - anonymaws (05/23/2012) [-]
yey
User avatar #237 - VikingDK (05/23/2012) [-]
I just had my stomach drop, when they came into the cabin, scared that you were gonna pull a "open, the door, get on the floor, everybody walk the dinosaur" on us
#7 - badwolfdestruction (05/22/2012) [-]
Just make a book series already.
Just make a book series already.
#11 to #8 - John Cena (05/22/2012) [-]
when will #6 be out??
User avatar #16 to #11 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Possibly tonight ;)
User avatar #17 to #16 - machinemaster ONLINE (05/22/2012) [-]
I am sketching some artwork for you, I will try to get it done In the tomorrow maths lesson :)
User avatar #22 to #17 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
I appreciate it, maybe I'll use it!
#29 to #16 - John Cena (05/22/2012) [-]
thank you ob!! we all love you. <3
User avatar #30 to #29 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
And I love you all too ;)
User avatar #118 to #30 - iNiighTMareZz (05/22/2012) [-]
Wow, this is really an amazing story haha. It's really fun to read, I'm just trying to imagine what would happen if you went full out on it. I NEED THE NEXT PART!
User avatar #127 to #118 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Tonight, I'm going to be starting to write it in about 30 mins or so, Daughter needed to eat lol so I'm helping feed her ;)
User avatar #66 - anonimoss (05/22/2012) [-]
10/10
would bang Will continue reading
#234 - twistedmedics (05/23/2012) [-]
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#114 - hillko (05/22/2012) [-]
Great story! But you can stop putting &quot;more?&quot; at the end of the stories, its obvious everyone wants more.   
10/10
Great story! But you can stop putting "more?" at the end of the stories, its obvious everyone wants more.
10/10
User avatar #115 to #114 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Hahahahaha sure ;)
User avatar #116 to #115 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Just for you ;)
#32 - xoMissMurder (05/22/2012) [-]
Can`t wait for pt. 6   
   
10/10
Can`t wait for pt. 6

10/10
#37 to #32 - darman (05/22/2012) [-]
Agreed.
Agreed.
#98 - Turtleboner (05/22/2012) [-]
noooo not jess!
on a side note, how about some zombified/dangerous animals eh? The natural order must have shifted with all these humans gone, so animals must have complete freedom to roam around and make meals out of survivors. at least introduce a pet for our main guy.
I'm thinking in nevada there would be bears or coyotes dicking around cities and the forests at least...
#106 to #98 - John Cena (05/22/2012) [-]
just sayin they'd be normal animals, not zombie animals. zombie viruses can only zombify human DNA
User avatar #129 to #106 - jakedalaxer (05/22/2012) [-]
scientifically proven, right?
User avatar #108 to #106 - imagnetsux ONLINE (05/22/2012) [-]
is that canon? i must have forgotten seeing that in one of the earlier posts. can you please tell me which post and where i can find this information?
User avatar #107 to #98 - imagnetsux ONLINE (05/22/2012) [-]
ZOMBIE BEAR!!!
#124 to #107 - stallwallwriter (05/22/2012) [-]
Good God, you mean...
...Zombears?
#76 - aurelianopeachdoor (05/22/2012) [-]
You should write a book or get someone with awesome drawing skills and you should make a comic book together. And yes OB, WE WANT MORE.
Pic unrelated
User avatar #78 to #76 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Good and my fiancee is going to work on some art for me and I have a person or 2 working on some stuff, like one who is doing some in school today lol I wouldn't mind seeing what they've come up with ;)
User avatar #79 to #78 - aurelianopeachdoor (05/22/2012) [-]
Awesome, if you upload pics of the artwork it would be so awesome i could repaint my whole room with my jizz. 50/10
#89 to #79 - John Cena (05/22/2012) [-]
YOU NEED TO SIMPLIFY THE FRACTION
IT IS 5/1 OR 5
User avatar #80 to #79 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Haha ;)
#236 - John Cena (05/23/2012) [-]
**anonymous rolled a random image posted in comment #170 at Cleverbot knows best **
Is this worth reading?
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#123 - stallwallwriter (05/22/2012) [-]
1) I enjoy the clear and well-planned action sequences, they're easy to visualize.   
2) It's both understandable and fascinating to watch the two of them descend into gleeful brutality. See especially that bit where she left the last zombie for him, damn that was cool.   
3) A little confused why such tough girl like Jessie would totally shut down when they're surrounded. Did she have a bad experience like this? And where did she get her ass-stomping capabilities anyway?    
4) Will John come back??.   
5) First time I've ever hoped a character might get a limb amputated, because I think ditching that leg is the only way she might survive.   
   
tl:dr, this series is growing on me like a zombie virus.
1) I enjoy the clear and well-planned action sequences, they're easy to visualize.
2) It's both understandable and fascinating to watch the two of them descend into gleeful brutality. See especially that bit where she left the last zombie for him, damn that was cool.
3) A little confused why such tough girl like Jessie would totally shut down when they're surrounded. Did she have a bad experience like this? And where did she get her ass-stomping capabilities anyway?
4) Will John come back??.
5) First time I've ever hoped a character might get a limb amputated, because I think ditching that leg is the only way she might survive.

tl:dr, this series is growing on me like a zombie virus.
#86 - animelovers (05/22/2012) [-]
not jess.......please..god...no!
not jess.......please..god...no!
#84 - Midirr (05/22/2012) [-]
Give me number 6! :p
Give me number 6! :p
#120 - xstrangebrewx (05/22/2012) [-]
&lt;--- How you should end the series
<--- How you should end the series
#203 to #120 - John Cena (05/23/2012) [-]
Hank hill fights an army of droids? Wut.
#42 - John Cena (05/22/2012) [-]
asking if we want more.... ob pls.
#3 - warlockrichard (05/22/2012) [-]
this is great
I eagerly look forward to the next one
User avatar #5 to #3 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Good ;) Mind rating /10?
User avatar #10 to #5 - warlockrichard (05/22/2012) [-]
8-9/10
excellent storytelling, very suspenseful, and you really start to care about the characters
my only real complaint has more to do with my latent OCD
I got the impression from Pt 4 that there would be more Zed attacking the cabin or perhaps I wasn't paying enough attention
also I'm somewhat curious as to what kind of knife she's using to be able to cut off head's and limbs with or are they just that decomposed?
otherwise a very excellent read
User avatar #55 to #10 - Stamyham ONLINE (05/22/2012) [-]
I'd imagine that they're just that decomposed. It bothered me, too, until I made that connection and realized that the characters aren't superhuman.
#184 - John Cena (05/23/2012) [-]
What if OP's actually an author





And he's posting the first few chapters of his upcoming book as an advertisement?



Nah but seriously man good **** :)
#126 - Lazaruz (05/22/2012) [-]
I am going to tell you something
and that something is you,
theoriginalbastard, are a genius.
A geniussss...
Arrg.
User avatar #132 to #126 - theoriginalbastard (05/22/2012) [-]
Thank you ;)
#113 - goodguygregmazz (05/22/2012) [-]
i don't know about you guys...but i really want this guy to bang this jess girl...and by the way these are amazing i can't stop reading them good job op
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