My book. So FJ, I'm currently writing a book, down below is the prologue, i want you to read it and tell me what you think Prologue We’ve all heard the stories. My book So FJ I'm currently writing a down below is the prologue i want you to read it and tell me what think Prologue We’ve all heard stories
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My book. So FJ, I'm currently writing a book, down below is the prologue, i want you to read it and tell me what you think Prologue We’ve all heard the stories.

So FJ, I'm currently writing a book, down below is the prologue, i want you to read it and tell me what you think

Prologue

We’ve all heard the stories. A fallen angel or god who vows revenge upon those who have shunned them. That revenge will bring about the end of all mankind in an epic battle between the two forces.
It has been call many things. Apocalypse, Armageddon, Ragnorak, etc. the story closest to the truth is found within the Bible.
A rogue angel is cast from the heavens. Thrown so hard he travels straight through the crust. The sharp rocks tearing the feathers from his wings and the flesh from his bones, horribly disfiguring him. However, when he plunged in the mantle, the heat burned what little feathers and hairs that remained, off. Swimming desperately he found refuge in a small cave in the bottom most portion of the crust.
Trillions upon Trillions of years later, mankind’s population has grown considerably. The playthings of the Dark One who had been cast down and the Creator who tries to steer them clear of his influence. His power has increased substantially beyond that which he had when with the Creator, due to collecting the souls of those he cheated them from. Although his appearance has changed for the worse, the heat and dry air has tanned his skin a reddish color, his wings (which could not grow back it’s feathers) were now covered in dark gray scales and his lack of heavenly food has given him a starved look.
What does all this have to do with me? Let’s just say I got caught in the middle of it all…

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