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#349 - tenminutevision
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#345 - aergo
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#344 - anon
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i know this story if anyone wants to know
he gets on the bus and starts crying and then a kind old lady comes over and ask what is wrong he says the girl he loved died in a car accident on the way down to see him fight in a tournament, the old lady starts to cry as well because her grand daughter had just in a accident while she was driving the boy realizes she is the same girl and he then drops out of school and breaks everything he owns on the day of her funeral she jumps out of the casket and yells friday friday gotta get down on friday.
#367 to #344 - anon
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(06/04/2011) [-]
lol you all thumbing me down when you know it was hilarious.
#354 to #344 - anon
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u jelly?
#361 to #354 - User
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im done i dont like alll these endings......   
and i dont have anything that can express my anger with what ive seen
im done i dont like alll these endings......
and i dont have anything that can express my anger with what ive seen
#363 to #361 - anon
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lol he jelly?
#343 - User
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mother ****** i am not pleased and unlike will (below) i am mad >.>
mother ****** i am not pleased and unlike will (below) i am mad >.>
#341 - HomerSimpson
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Here's an ending I came up with. a happy one(:
ending: (continuing on from "friends don't notice expression on coache's or my face")

>sit in back of bus, alone >think about what coach told me >"your mother died just a few hours ago" >drop face in hands, cry >no one notices >arrive home >get off bus, talk to dad >mom died in car crash >go up to room alone >no one comes to visit >get no texts or emails of compassion from peers >realize no one cares >realize 'friends' werent true friends >cry >dad comes up, says someone is at the door >go downstairs, its the girl from 8th grade
>we don't say anything >surprised she'd even remembered me >she walks up and hugs me >we dont let go
#407 to #341 - anon
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AND THEN THEY ******.JPEG btw this is thePwncilsharpener too lazy to sign in.
#342 to #341 - HomerSimpson
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>I dont want her to
>she looks up at me with her eyes
>"...I'm so sorry"
>all I can think of to say
>she says nothing, leans up, kisses me
>realize shes the one person that mattered; that cared
>three years later, propose to girl
>marry her
>Never kickbox again
best i could do(:
#353 to #342 - User
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ur reposting your own comment wtf?!?!
ur reposting your own comment wtf?!?!
#347 to #342 - User
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i thought it was the girl who died.... but i like yours more
i thought it was the girl who died.... but i like yours more
#348 to #347 - anon
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i posted the real ending.
#362 to #348 - User
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(06/04/2011) [-]
no.... no you didnt
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#355 to #348 - User
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o.O
#340 - anon
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(06/04/2011) [-]
Wasted last few seconds of my life. I want them back now.
#337 - freakaleak
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(06/04/2011) [-]
God damnit, I was getting into it too..
#335 - anon
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(06/04/2011) [-]
I THOUGHT THE COACH WAS GOING TO RAPE HIM l:
#334 - Cilreve
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(06/04/2011) [-]
****...that was genius...epic troll is epic
#333 - Maggotkittie
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now ur gonna get it
now ur gonna get it
#332 - ItsMeBaby
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#326 - organicposter
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#323 - endlesswrath
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(06/04/2011) [-]
Dammit, I actually want to know the end to the story...
#321 - theidiotone
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#320 - clarinetchick
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#318 - Xavage ONLINE
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#317 - HomerSimpson
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Here's an ending I came up with. a happy one(:
ending: (continuing on from "friends don't notice expression on coache's or my face")

>sit in back of bus, alone >think about what coach told me >"your mother died just a few hours ago" >drop face in hands, cry >no one notices >arrive home >get off bus, talk to dad >mom died in car crash >go up to room alone >no one comes to visit >get no texts or emails of compassion from peers >realize no one cares >realize 'friends' werent true friends >cry >dad comes up, says someone is at the door >go downstairs, its the girl from 8th grade
>we don't say anything >surprised she'd even remembered me >she walks up and hugs me >we dont let go
#319 to #317 - HomerSimpson
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>I dont want her to
>she looks up at me with her eyes
>"...I'm so sorry"
>all I can think of to say
>she says nothing, leans up, kisses me
>realize shes the one person that mattered; that cared
>three years later, propose to girl
>marry her
>Never kickbox again
#350 to #319 - legostudio
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#339 to #319 - freakaleak
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I am now satisfied.
#328 to #319 - clyfon
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(06/04/2011) [-]
i love you man thanks for putting in a good ending
#331 to #328 - HomerSimpson
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np(:
#322 to #319 - HomerSimpson
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best I could do(:
#329 to #322 - douchestolemyname
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(06/04/2011) [-]
FEELS GOOD MAN.JPG
#316 - douchestolemyname
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(06/04/2011) [-]
And people say you need to go to college to write good stories.......
#315 - DoucheKiller
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#314 - whitesuburbankid **User deleted account**
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