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User avatar #5 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
too tired to read straight

Here's a link to my fic... it has pretty positive reviews so far. Only thing I did poorly was descriptions by my reckoning. Compare and contrast :3

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User avatar #6 to #5 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
oh god i dont do too well with tragedies
User avatar #7 to #6 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
not to tragic in the first two chapters. By chapter 8 Rainbow will be catatonic though... so... it's a good thing there are only two chapters written :3
User avatar #8 to #7 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
**** i almost cried and i didnt read it
User avatar #9 to #8 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
whut? How... I don't even... IT'S NOT EVEN THAT SAD?! All I did was kill flim and flam :\
User avatar #11 to #9 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
i mean the the comment you made about dash before. right now im writing chap 2 of my story
User avatar #12 to #11 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
ah right well... On the upside she dies! Uhhh... That's an upside... Epilogue is a conversation with her in heaven! :D
#14 to #12 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
dude spoiler alert
dude spoiler alert
User avatar #15 to #14 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
it'lll be months if not years before the epilogue. Here's hoping you forget by then xD
#17 to #15 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
i was more focused on the first part where she dies
i was more focused on the first part where she dies
User avatar #18 to #17 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
still... months if not years. It's going to be over 50 chapters if all goes as planned...
User avatar #20 to #19 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
oh well. Sorry for ruining it for you xD To be honest, her death isn't the climax or anything... it's just something that happens along the way...
User avatar #21 to #20 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
i know, the climax is where everything is answered. i doubt that rd dying would be it, still sad though
User avatar #22 to #21 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
it's reality. That's why I had the epilogue. About a dozen ponies will die by the end.
#23 to #22 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
das kinda sad.jpg
das kinda sad.jpg
User avatar #24 to #23 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
That's war xD
User avatar #25 to #24 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
what is it good for
User avatar #26 to #25 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
bringing about change... innovation... control?
#31 to #26 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
meep ok bye
meep ok bye
User avatar #29 to #26 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
i was making a song reference
User avatar #30 to #29 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
ah gotcha
#27 to #26 - onlyanonymous (03/18/2012) [-]
absolutely nothing   
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absolutely nothing
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User avatar #28 to #27 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
well... no... those were the 3 reasons war were declared in my story xD

luna - change
discord - innovation
celestia - control
User avatar #13 to #12 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
..... **** man thats why i hate reading tragedy. i hate sad things call me a pussy i just like to be happy
User avatar #16 to #13 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
but closuuuuuuuuuuuure :D
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User avatar #34 to #33 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
http://www.fimfiction. net/story/16104/In-the-land-of-Equestria
#32 - cinnamontoastmunch (03/18/2012) [-]
I am not very very very smart. I can't read.
#35 to #32 - John Cena (03/19/2012) [-]
...but you can type...?
#36 to #35 - cinnamontoastmunch (03/20/2012) [-]
yes. and i can read. But not too well. I read Harry potter but ************* moby dick i will not read
User avatar #10 - nildnas (03/18/2012) [-]
eh sure. Why not.
User avatar #4 - Sethorein (03/18/2012) [-]
link meh! 800 words is candy
User avatar #1 - phoenixburch ONLINE (03/18/2012) [-]
could you give me a link?
User avatar #2 to #1 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
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User avatar #3 to #1 - damandan (03/18/2012) [-]
anyother way other than fimfiction? i need 1000 words and im not ready for that
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