x
Click to expand

Twilight Falls on Equestria

  • Recommend tagsx
+12
Views: 1986
Favorited: 1
Submitted: 03/04/2012
Share On Facebook
Add to favorites Subscribe to Sethorein Subscribe to ponytime submit to reddit
What do you think? Give us your opinion. Anonymous comments allowed.
User avatar #1 - devryn (03/04/2012) [-]
interesting story. hard to judge fully on the prologue alone but it was well written. if the quality of the story line is really good all the way through, keep up the good writing, and you incorporate the other ponies in a good way it could easily make EQD if that's what your aiming for. again its hard to tell from just a prologue but it has potential and i'm looking forward to reading the rest.
User avatar #5 to #1 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/04/2012) [-]
I have ideas... though I'm kind of scared to write them...
User avatar #6 to #5 - devryn (03/04/2012) [-]
do you mind sharing them with me?
User avatar #7 to #6 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/04/2012) [-]
sure I'll pm them to you. Don't want to spoil things for others.
User avatar #8 to #7 - devryn (03/04/2012) [-]
of course.
User avatar #10 to #8 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/04/2012) [-]
well I gtg, I'll be back much later. Work is work. Hopefully you'll reply xD

Is it just me or is this not appearing in ponytime newest uploads? Weird...
User avatar #9 to #8 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/04/2012) [-]
so what do you think?
User avatar #11 to #9 - devryn (03/04/2012) [-]
sorry it took kind of long i had to think about it for a little. i just sent a reply.
User avatar #13 to #11 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/04/2012) [-]
how do i change the rating of my story. I think it should be rated at least teen :\
User avatar #16 - sunkenpoiuytrew (03/06/2012) [-]
why would they try to kill fluttershy...she is too adorable to die

User avatar #17 to #16 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/06/2012) [-]
It's called treason. Adorability has nothing to do with it. Also, many people turned against Celestia when Shy was taken in. It's what happens when Marshal Law supercedes individual rights. I tried to make that clear with the whole "guard ponies pulling people into empty buildings" line. They weren't sitting them down for some cake and juice o.o
#14 - frenchiefrenchy (03/05/2012) [-]
I like it.   
I'm following your story now.
I like it.
I'm following your story now.
User avatar #15 to #14 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/05/2012) [-]
I'm happy for that :)
0
#3 - toadsniffer **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
User avatar #4 to #3 - Sethorein ONLINE (03/04/2012) [-]
the synopsis is on the page, but essentially. The day of the zap apple harvest the traditional meteor shower occurs. Unfortunately the meteors head straight into canterlot and destroy the city. Luna is accused of causing this to happen as well as releasing discord. Several months later she is found in the care of shy and is put on trial (with Shy). The trial is a complete joke and ponies are split in opinion. When the verdict is settled Luna escapes and ponies turn on each other depending on which sovereign they support. The Narrator is an OC pony who follows Luna. He is the tactician of the Shadowbolts.
0
#12 to #4 - toadsniffer **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
User avatar #2 - acsinclair (03/04/2012) [-]
I'll check it out in the morning. For some reason, the title keeps making me think of Night Falls on Sentinel, a book from the Elder Scrolls series...
 Friends (0)