Tshirt revision- read description. Hey Fj, a while ago I made the tshirt design you see above and the most requested change in the design was to make it more tr

Tshirt revision- read description

Tshirt revision- read description. Hey Fj, a while ago I made the tshirt design you see above and the most requested change in the design was to make it more tr

Hey Fj, a while ago I made the tshirt design you see above and the most requested change in the design was to make it more true to the pony style. It took me a bit but here is the new design! I'd love some feedback on it before I stick it in my zazzle store for purchase.

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Submitted: 06/15/2013
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#1 - sinery (06/15/2013) [-]
I am the night.
User avatar #21 - psychadelicace ONLINE (06/16/2013) [-]
the easiest way to spot a faggot
#26 to #21 - anon (06/16/2013) [-]
Meanwhile your profile pic says you're one of those geeks who fap to japanese drawings because nobody wants to touch your ugly body.

Face it, you're just as bad as a brony.
User avatar #28 to #26 - psychadelicace ONLINE (06/17/2013) [-]
i prefer the term otaku but thank you ;)
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User avatar #23 to #21 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
I agree, their hate comments do give them away pretty easily.
User avatar #4 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
And the shirt is up; www.zazzle.com/i_am_the_night_mlp_luna_t_shirt-235070158719422105

Still open to feedback!
#2 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
>make it more true to the pony design
>makes it look like an actual horse

hah just joking, i like it, for how much would you sell it?
User avatar #3 to #2 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
The top one is the new one, the bottom is the old. I look at the differences and agree, the bottom is way to horse-ish!

As for price they run about 25$ USD. There are 121 different styles and some run more and some less.
User avatar #5 to #3 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
oh, ok. oops got my **** upside down!

do you mind if i give you some critique?
User avatar #6 to #5 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
Of course, that's why I posted it. I'm really hoping to make it the best possible.
User avatar #7 to #6 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
alright, but give me a sec (im gonna do it with pictchas)
User avatar #8 to #7 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
#9 to #8 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
ok, lets get down to business!

- cutiemark is not facing the right way
- crown could be taller (i drew it taller, doesnt have to look like mine)
- front right leg is in a weird place, or at least make it overlap with her necklace
- where's the left hind leg : O?

thats all i could find, other than that its pretty darn good vector, didnt even find any layer errors. (i used to do this all the time in a pony reddit)
#11 to #9 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
Dammit, I just spotted the cutiemark thing, too.
The crown always seems much smaller than the horn, so I didn't want to draw too much attention away, but you're right. It does look better taller.

The legs are weird. XD I just was hoping to show off the necklace, I've been debating changing it.

Aaand as for the left hind leg, at this stage of jumping horses tend to keep their back legs near perfectly aligned like so. With no outlines it'd be hard to tell what's one leg and what's the other without having the leg in a weird position. Infact the front legs aren't even really natural. You can see in the old design they were lined up like that, but it was much more dramatic to splay the legs. I might actually remove one of the front legs, too. I couldn't get them to hinge below the neckline without looking odd like I could in the old design.

Overall it was meant to be closer to a silhouette than a real picture of her, so hence to lack of detail on the face, horn, ears, and legs. Sort've displaying the 'key' parts of her 'outfit'? If you know what I mean. Without the use of outlines things tend to blur together, which is why the gap in the front legs had to be so dramatic. Otherwise it might look like a weird blob leg.
#12 to #11 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
huh... i see your point now... i really didnt know horses jumped like that! but yea, i suppose that you might want to make it a 'pure' silhouette with only 2 legs visible... i guess the only problems are the cutie mark and the crown, also i think the horn could be a bit taller, but just a bit!
User avatar #14 to #12 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
I think you're right. Now it's which leg to keep. The upper or lower one.. Hrm..
#15 to #14 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]

or at least take the lower one, and make it... well, lower. just passing under her collar thing.
#16 to #15 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
How's this?

Obviously the watermarks won't be on the shirt. XD
#17 to #16 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
pretty good! a bit of fine tuning and its perfect!
pretty good! a bit of fine tuning and its perfect!
User avatar #18 to #17 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
wonderful! From what I see.. straighten the crown up a bit.. Uhm.. that leg. XD I tried to make it look like the 'elbow' was coming down from the body. Did I succeed?
#20 to #18 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
oh crap, sorry for not answering,i just jumped into kerbal and forgot about the world : (

i would leave the leg without the 'elbow' idk i think its better to not over complicate a simplistic drawing... wouldn't be a simplistic drawing anymore eh?
User avatar #10 to #9 - comanderspy (06/16/2013) [-]
oh also, the moon doesnt have to be the show moon, i quite liked the moon you had in the old picture, maybe just make the dark spots look like the mare in the moon.
keep the same color maybe?
User avatar #13 to #10 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
Unfortunately the old template was destroyed and I had to recreate everything. That moon was veeery hard to do. I do have a more realistic moon underlayed the nightmare moon. You can see it towards the right.

I'm afraid the old design was only on this Custom Ink website, which asks 25$ too, but I didn't get any of that price. So I had to bump the price up if I wanted to actually get paid for my design. I think I still have the link somewhere, I might be able to Salvage some of it, but the majority of it's gone, I think.
#24 - anon (06/16/2013) [-]
old was better
User avatar #25 to #24 - Icedangel (06/16/2013) [-]
Nobody liked the old. The old is the bottom shirt. I had exactly 0 people show interest in buying it, so I redesigned.
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