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User avatar #16 - sotsog
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(06/26/2012) [-]
I thought it was funny. It does have a small flow issue though. I think you would also benefit from differentiating your characters a little more. Even though the different color shirts should be obvious, they are not always in plain view and can easily be over looked. Either way no "memes", original art, and a joke that actually works. Thumb for you. Keep up the OC.
User avatar #17 to #16 - pleasewelcomejc [OP]
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(06/26/2012) [-]
Thank you, I really appreciate the critique.