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#3 - themastermorris
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(05/18/2013) [-]
Seems like a good starting idea, however delivering it could use some work. For instance, when they were talking about the killer escaping, it seemed very generic and unbelievable.
#4 to #3 - cadattack [OP]
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(05/18/2013) [-]
Its a concept Idea, I have a script written and pre approved funding from a movie company, they loved the script, This was shot with my camera and well.... yeah, it wasnt good, its just to show people an idea that i wanna make, We will be going into more detail with the story to come.
#5 to #4 - themastermorris
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(05/19/2013) [-]
Well, best of luck yo you
#6 to #5 - cadattack [OP]
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(05/19/2013) [-]
There is alot more to the "Break out", it was an inside job, i wont go into great depths, but you will see
#2 - anon
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(05/18/2013) [-]
the only thing i can say is during that scene where you were talking about the killer walking out of that prison you were whisper shouting to the max your should try to just shout and adjust the levels in post
#1 - anon
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(05/18/2013) [-]
Is that the Lavender Town theme?