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User avatar #19 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (04/29/2012) [-]
It needs more feeling. the guy doesnt seem frightened enough. There needs to be more emotion

User avatar #20 to #19 - westonbeast (04/29/2012) [-]
Well like he said, he hasn't seen a human in 72 days. This would cause the guy to become feral and much more of killer. Killers do not tend to show fear, emotionally or physically. I believe he captured the emotion very well. Anger with hidden fear.
User avatar #23 to #20 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (04/30/2012) [-]
I'm not saying the stories bad. it has what seems like the making of a good plot. I'm just saying that it isn't a scary as it could be. other than that I like it so far
User avatar #24 to #23 - westonbeast (04/30/2012) [-]
I would agree, also I believe they shouldn't let the Zombies have guns >.> Sticking to original Zombie ways is much more horrifying.
User avatar #25 to #24 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/01/2012) [-]
but reading this did make me want to post my horror story on here.
User avatar #26 to #25 - westonbeast (05/01/2012) [-]
I'm writing a story of a lone survivor of an unknown apocalypse. The apocalypse only killed humans, not animals or plants. It's going pretty good, I'll keep you updated if you want?
Also, you should post your story and send me the link.
User avatar #27 to #26 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/01/2012) [-]
sounds like it will be a good story. and the main problem i have is writing my story. im not very good at putting my ideas down on paper
User avatar #28 to #27 - westonbeast (05/01/2012) [-]
Send me some, I'm an okay corrector. Better then some people.
User avatar #29 to #28 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/02/2012) [-]
The story is post apocalyptic. Its about the creatures that show up. They are not zombies or anything like that. They are grayish black with yellow eyes. No one knows where they came from or what they are. The only survivors live in bunkers or well protected buildings. They showed up after a rock with glowing print on it crashed on our planet. The print is impossible decipher. Thats most of the plot. I'm still working on how to put it together and there are many type of creatures but i decided the main ones

User avatar #30 to #29 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/02/2012) [-]
if you would like i would like to hear more about your story
User avatar #31 to #30 - westonbeast (05/02/2012) [-]
Your story sounds good :D
Well mine is practically a diary of the last survivor on Earth, or so it seems. It's basically a survival story and the man's trek. He's anonymous until the end so you have to read it to find out his actual name and if he's truly the last human on Earth.
User avatar #32 to #31 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/03/2012) [-]
Thank you. Your story sounds good too. I'm a big with horror stuff and I love making horror stories.

User avatar #33 to #32 - westonbeast (05/03/2012) [-]
Me too. Horror stories are always so interesting. Stuff you can't explain and it never truly is logical but that's the fun in it.
User avatar #34 to #33 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/03/2012) [-]
I told a few of my friends the story and they actually lost sleep over it. But my friends arent very good at handling horror
User avatar #35 to #34 - westonbeast (05/03/2012) [-]
Could you describe the creatures a little more? They don't sound like a normal horror creature.
User avatar #36 to #35 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/03/2012) [-]
there are many types but the main ones are call stalkers cause of how they hunt people. They prefer hunting in forested areas (which is where the story takes place) They are gray ish black with glowing yellow eyes. they have 10inch long claws. they look humanoid but are built more for jumping and hiding in tree like areas. they hunt at night and light attracts them. their mouth is a little bigger than ours and has razor like teeth. they also have no hair
User avatar #37 to #36 - westonbeast (05/03/2012) [-]
Can they be killed?
User avatar #38 to #37 - billjoehappypurple ONLINE (05/03/2012) [-]
Yeah they arent hard to kill they are just very fast and smart
User avatar #39 to #38 - westonbeast (05/04/2012) [-]
Ah, I see.
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