Story: Part 2 (Check URL for part 1)

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Submitted: 05/02/2012
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#8 - MrTacos (05/02/2012) [-]
Give me more to read nao T~T
Give me more to read nao T~T
User avatar #9 to #8 - fudgeandjunkies [OP](05/02/2012) [-]
I'll try to have another one by tomorrow
#6 - ovall (05/02/2012) [-]
nice change of pace from what Morbid has become lately, loving how it started and this continuation! keep up the good work, mate
User avatar #7 to #6 - fudgeandjunkies [OP](05/02/2012) [-]
thanks man
User avatar #2 - neokun (05/02/2012) [-]
This is awesome.
User avatar #3 to #2 - fudgeandjunkies [OP](05/02/2012) [-]
Thanks man.
#4 - tehinternets (05/02/2012) [-]
keep them coming!
User avatar #5 to #4 - fudgeandjunkies [OP](05/02/2012) [-]
I'm actually pretty excited for this "possible" series of short stories. This one should have a couple more parts, but I still don't even have a title for it. Thanks for the positive feedback.
#19 - anon (05/05/2012) [-]
You only need to do Jack as a child.

You sick perverted monster, I hope you go to hell and munch on cocks day to night as Satan reigns over your wretched little soul. Dear lord, have mercy upon this ass-licking, *********** piece of turd.
#18 - thecatqueen (05/05/2012) [-]

If you made a book out of this, I would totally buy it!
User avatar #13 - xxtrollxx (05/03/2012) [-]
you should actually make this in to a book. you could make some money off it. i would totally buy it.
#1 - anon (05/02/2012) [-]
good stuff
User avatar #15 - owenkolo (05/03/2012) [-]
i like it some parts seem a little rushed/emotionless. like the guy didn't seem upset about his wife but maybe hes just a cold calculating scientist anyway enjoying it and very good overall
User avatar #16 to #15 - fudgeandjunkies [OP](05/03/2012) [-]
I'm sorry if you don't like that part. I kind of did rush through writing that part, because I wasn't really worried about it right now. I was going to just get the main ideas written down and I was going to go back later and edit it. I was basically just letting you guys see the process of writing it. Thanks for the feedback, though.
User avatar #17 to #16 - owenkolo (05/04/2012) [-]
didnt say i didnt like it :) just thought it could use some work, also didnt know it was just the main idea but like i said great so far :D

User avatar #14 - willyumz (05/03/2012) [-]
Really enjoying this. Good work. Can't wait to read more.
User avatar #11 - ilovepelicans (05/03/2012) [-]
moar. nao.
User avatar #10 - isexcats (05/02/2012) [-]
****** i want more
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