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So I wrote a creepypasta

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Submitted: 06/19/2013
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User avatar #1 - sebthebrony (06/19/2013) [-]
twi I did it baby <3
User avatar #2 to #1 - twi (06/19/2013) [-]
oh god x.x

that was really good ^^
User avatar #3 to #2 - sebthebrony (06/19/2013) [-]
people din't like it though
User avatar #39 - therealtjthemedic (06/20/2013) [-]
bumsnatchersghost
User avatar #41 to #39 - sebthebrony (06/20/2013) [-]
wat
User avatar #21 - xern (06/20/2013) [-]
could the author care to tell me what meaning this creepypasta had?
The ending confused me a bit...
User avatar #25 to #21 - sebthebrony (06/20/2013) [-]
Yeah, I derped the end a bit.
The original concept was for the thing that took faces to have poor control over english, so he'd repeat the words "Yes, son/friend/dad?"
i derped bad
User avatar #28 to #25 - xern (06/20/2013) [-]
ahh, so "The Thing" takes the place of someone familiar, to be able to collect his next victim?
User avatar #30 to #28 - sebthebrony (06/20/2013) [-]
Yes
User avatar #32 to #30 - xern (06/20/2013) [-]
ahh, well then it got a bit more clear to me, good pasta though (Y)
User avatar #35 to #32 - sebthebrony (06/20/2013) [-]
Thanks. Is there something you didn't like? I'd sure appreciate some feedback
User avatar #45 to #35 - xern (06/20/2013) [-]
it was only the confusing ending, but when it was sorted out, i couldn't find any
User avatar #46 to #45 - sebthebrony (06/20/2013) [-]
Thanks for commenting then
User avatar #47 to #46 - xern (06/20/2013) [-]
no probs
User avatar #4 - ninjaofdarkness (06/19/2013) [-]
Wow...great read
User avatar #5 to #4 - sebthebrony (06/19/2013) [-]
Thanks man. Why is it getting thumbed down though? what do you think was bad with the it?
User avatar #49 to #5 - ninjaofdarkness (06/23/2013) [-]
No faults that I can find personally...maybe some people might prefer longer creepypastas?
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