Drowning. I know this isn't funny, it's not supposed to be. Lately I've been wondering what people are thinking as they're dying. I try my best to recreate that sad stories erryday
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Drowning

 
Drowning. I know this isn't funny, it's not supposed to be. Lately I've been wondering what people are thinking as they're dying. I try my best to recreate that

I know this isn't funny, it's not supposed to be. Lately I've been wondering what people are thinking as they're dying. I try my best to recreate that situation and the emotions they're feeling at that time.

This is my first attempt and if people actually like it or want to see more, I'll gladly oblige and take suggestions.

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Submitted: 05/21/2013
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#1 - timmity (05/21/2013) [-]
that was amazing, this deserves front page instead of that McDisasters ******** . Made me cry. Thank you.
User avatar #2 to #1 - notstill (05/21/2013) [-]
First of all thank you for the nice response.

Second, this might be a green text on black background like McDisasters but they're completely unrelated so they can't really be compared.
User avatar #3 to #2 - timmity (05/21/2013) [-]
Yes but McDisaters isint even all that funny and with spelling such as "thru" and "cussing", this is wonderfully feely, enjoyable and well written.
User avatar #6 to #2 - Emers (05/22/2013) [-]
I kind of agree with timmity, but (not that it fully matters as it doesn't affect the story) maybe you could change the layout of it. Sometimes colored text is distracting, but that's just me.
User avatar #8 to #6 - notstill (05/22/2013) [-]
I figured that green on black would be the easiest to read
User avatar #16 - overchill (05/23/2013) [-]
You are a goldfish and you forgot that you live in water...again
User avatar #4 - dinomyar (05/21/2013) [-]
Then you could see a small light, that got slowly brighter and brighter.....until you emerged from your new mothers womb, and were born into your next life.
User avatar #11 - vexaton ONLINE (05/22/2013) [-]
I'm going to quote my "Experience story". I was huffing butane for about a month, before quitting, and coming back to it recently. This is one of the hallucinations I had, and it seemed fitting:

"I had another "floating" experience, but this one was the most dramatic one. I felt as if I were sinking. Sinking deep down in an ocean. Everything surrounding me was blue, getting darker every second. I was sinking face down, but after a while, I felt a wall. Something stopping me from going further. I started pounding on the wall, and it broke pretty easily. No water fell through, only me. I floated in an empty void of nothing. All black. Nothing was there to hurt me. I felt complete tranquillity. A bliss, a feeling so good, that I can't explain it. Nothing was wrong with the world, and nothing was wrong with me. I could stay here forever, thinking. Thinking about all the great things the mind can come up with. As soon as I got sober after that trip, my depression got even worse. As a side-note; this is what I think death is like."
#10 - awesomechardey (05/22/2013) [-]
I thought it was one of thos brilliant mc disaster posts!
User avatar #7 - bannedfartoooften (05/22/2013) [-]
"Dear god I hope someone deletes my internet history."
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