L3NZ2. I redrew my character, this time on a computer. /channel/katawashoujo2/L3NZ1/ljToGyw/ Basically shes a "shut in" - someone who stays in all day lyk dis if u cri


L3NZ2. I redrew my character, this time on a computer. /channel/katawashoujo2/L3NZ1/ljToGyw/ Basically shes a "shut in" - someone who stays in all day

I redrew my character, this time on a computer.


Basically shes a "shut in" - someone who stays in all day and browsers the internet. (in her case sites like funnyjunk and 4chan).

She insists on people calling her 'L3NZ1' instead of her real name; Lensley
She is outgoing, yet bad at talking so ends up shouting "memes" - "NO U!" "DO WANT" "GHEY"
Other than that i'll let the writes imagination run wild.

I still need to redraw her 2 or 3 more times before i'm happy with her design (this is just an excuse to why its so poorly made)
Any feedback would help. What do you think of her hair?

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User avatar #9 - sixeightthree (03/20/2013) [-]
I like it :3 I just wish I could draw things on a computer... make my life much, much easier.
User avatar #10 to #9 - yuvesh [OP](03/20/2013) [-]
you could always try, there are some good free software. GIMP (what i use, but some of the features are hard to find), sumo paint, paint.net, etc
I recently got a graphics tablet so it makes drawing on a PC more natural.
User avatar #4 - veteranoguy (03/19/2013) [-]
When i saw the first picture, i imagined her hair hair color was black. I really like the hair style though. Personally i think a darker hair color would suit her better, but thats just me.
#5 to #4 - yuvesh [OP](03/19/2013) [-]
This is the exact sort of stuff i want to hear.
Darker hair sounds like a great idea.
naturally back or should she dye it dark green or purple
(if we use her as our kenji having her in FJ colors would be cool)
User avatar #6 to #5 - veteranoguy (03/19/2013) [-]
It would be better to have it naturally black at the start and when the story progresses she would dye some hair strips green and purple.
and when you get her bad ending she will dye it blonde as a refrence to yellow funnyjunk.
User avatar #7 to #6 - yuvesh [OP](03/19/2013) [-]
it might work well the other way round; she starts of with her hair green/purple to try to impress people. (maybe shes using a fake internet persona to get attention because she thinks the real her is boring). Then once she experiences the 'real' world she changes her hair back to its natural color; black.
User avatar #8 to #7 - veteranoguy (03/19/2013) [-]
I actually like that idea. i really really like it.
User avatar #1 - Nightinear **User deleted account** (03/19/2013) [-]
If she talks about what sites she visit...
Either let that out or don't use sites that are known...
Wouldn't it seem weird?
Also, if she's a shut in why does she smile?
User avatar #2 to #1 - yuvesh [OP](03/19/2013) [-]
most of those questions can be left to the writers.
depending how they want to portray it, she can just use phrases and not talk about specific sites.
It has been suggested that she can act as the "Kenji" in our game.
or she could start off not being able to talk to people and the protagonist can can show her the joys of the real world and be a full route.
Why wouldn't she be smiling, maybe her post reached the front page and shes happy.
User avatar #11 to #2 - Nightinear **User deleted account** (03/20/2013) [-]
Ofc she can smile, I questioned myself after that
But talking about specific sites, just seems weird imo
But. I like the idea of her having a route.
Our "Kenji" should be male aswell, imo
User avatar #12 to #11 - yuvesh [OP](03/20/2013) [-]
She wont mention the sites in the VN. Its just a reference for writers to get an idea of her personality. if i said "she spends all her time on the internet" would be too vague.
I don't think we should aim to have a 'Kenji' we should make characters and if one fits into the role then so be it.
User avatar #13 to #12 - Nightinear **User deleted account** (03/20/2013) [-]
I think we first should focus on the girls, then side characters
User avatar #14 to #13 - yuvesh [OP](03/20/2013) [-]
> implying its its a dating sim

> implying any of us have played any other VNs

> implying we could think of anything better

> implying we have decided on it being a dating sim

User avatar #15 to #14 - Nightinear **User deleted account** (03/20/2013) [-]
>Implying it isn't going to be
#3 - yuvesh [OP](03/19/2013) [-]
...and here's the sketch i drew of her.
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