Creative Writing. This is the child I would want. rowe_ _ feather: one of my roommates used to work with tth graders in a creative writing class thing and they
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Creative Writing. This is the child I would want. rowe_ _ feather: one of my roommates used to work with tth graders in a creative writing class thing and they

This is the child I would want

rowe_ _ feather:
one of my roommates used to work with
tth graders in a creative writing class
thing and they had to write a romance
and most of the kids wrote stories about
princesses and crap but this one little girl
wrote about how a marshmallow fell in
love with a mug of cocoa and he loved the
cocoa so much that in order to be with
her he melted and died like wow kid that' s
some shakespearian **** right there
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#1 - duskmane ONLINE (09/28/2013) [-]
Together at last.
#54 to #1 - countbleck (09/29/2013) [-]
why does this break my heart
why does this break my heart
User avatar #57 to #1 - didyoufall (09/29/2013) [-]
THIS GAVE ME FEELS
#66 to #57 - duskmane ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
+9
#3 - siathedragon **User deleted account** has deleted their comment [-]
#9 to #3 - justinitforthecorn (09/29/2013) [-]
Your "p" is upside down.  That is all.   
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Your "p" is upside down. That is all.
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#16 to #3 - dekbedovertrekset (09/29/2013) [-]
Sorry, update required..
#39 to #16 - anon (09/29/2013) [-]
Had it already been 2 hours?
#21 to #16 - sorinshrouds ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
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#28 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
for year 10 advanced english
we had to write a romantic light story
i wrote a in depth 42 page homo erotic novel WITH illustrations
this being one of them (webcam upload ftw)
A+ and a letter sent home to ma'
User avatar #36 to #28 - swordwoman (09/29/2013) [-]
What did your mother say?

hue.
User avatar #40 to #36 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
nothing
i am the only one who checks the mail
huah
it was a "please contact the school we need to talk about your child" note
User avatar #48 to #40 - guymandude (09/29/2013) [-]
lol what were they planning to do, "out" you at a parent teacher conference? idiots.
User avatar #50 to #48 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
no
my mother eventually got a call
we went down and the teacher basicly said that she is concerned on how detailed my work was and how it got 100X more detailed in the sex scene before she read the scene out to my mother OUT OF ******* CONTEXT
MY MOTHER HAD NO IDEA WHAT THE "COAL" EYES WERE ABOUT NOR THE "RED" FEELING THE DISH BOY FELT AS THE WAITER INSERTED
User avatar #59 to #50 - guymandude (09/29/2013) [-]
also, are you gay? Or did you just want to write a story about gay guys?
#60 to #59 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
Im female   
but if i could   
i would totaly become a homosexual male
Im female
but if i could
i would totaly become a homosexual male
User avatar #62 to #60 - guymandude (09/29/2013) [-]
lol there are a lot of homosexual men who would give being a woman a shot for a while if they could (hell I would try it for a few days)
User avatar #64 to #62 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
the only diffrence is when you look down you may have some buldge coming from your chest which causes light pain in cold
having to keep with up with looks is impossible so i dont try
i am born female but due to my masculine form (boobs look more like moobs seriously)
over weight removing curves, facial hair and the such
i have been redirected in stores to the man section and been banned from Bras & Things for "cross dressing pervert"
so i just dont really assosiate with a strict gender if the M/F box is available i choose F because i am but.... i just dont feel it i dont even think it could ever be M but hey

User avatar #67 to #64 - guymandude (09/29/2013) [-]
You should have pulled your pants down in the store and saw if they felt bad enough to not realize the fact that you just exposed your genitals in public.
User avatar #56 to #50 - guymandude (09/29/2013) [-]
lol so basically she outed you AND read to her what would seem like perverted fantasies out of context
User avatar #61 to #56 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
exactly
12 pages DOUBLE SIDED
of gritty painful silk infused gay sex read in a most evil and cruel tone one that IS NOT the way you read it at all
User avatar #37 to #28 - funkyspot (09/29/2013) [-]
more pl0x
User avatar #45 to #41 - funkyspot (09/29/2013) [-]
What was the story about?
I'd love to know more
User avatar #53 to #45 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
well there is more then that but i cant fit it all in nor remember it
when i get the SAC back i will type it, flesh it out more and then release it
#47 to #45 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
a highschool student in his final year gets imployment at a resturant
he works as a dish bus cleaning dishes behind a chest high wall looking out to the restaurant he adjusts to the route on the first day nothing major
after a while he notices that the waiter has a ass that wont quit and forms a perverted crush he trys to refuse his attraction
the 3rd day of work the dish boy obtains a erection from looking at a-tooshie-toosh
the waiter dumps a pile of dishes splashing the dishboy with water. waiter trys to dry off the damp trousers of dish boy of course IS A BAD THING seeing the lochness monster wanted to come up for air bull ******** his way out of being touched up by the waiter the dish boy returns to cleaning
4th day after recording the times when the waiter goes to change out of his uniform our dish boy sneeks into the bathroom(where waiter gets changed) hides in the stalls and watches him change getting full view of waiter boys bod(in pic here)
the waiter offers to take the dish boy home after the dish boy makes a almost metal gear solid ******* exit
on day 5 waiter boy offers to take his new "friend" out to drinks as its dish boys first week they go to waiters house to get pre drunk but the waiter cant really handle his drink and falls asleep on the couch, dish boy places a blanket on him and climbs in the waiters bed he is swooned up in the scent of the pillows and passes out
he wakes to find the waiter climbing into bed with him after a quick confession of love
SEX HERE
then it goes into dish boy coming out to his father
oh and somewhere in there i dont remember when but the dish boy almost gets molested by his sisters best friend during a sleep over about day 2
User avatar #68 to #47 - funkyspot (09/29/2013) [-]
Pretty awesome drawing, self taught?
User avatar #70 to #68 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/30/2013) [-]
yeah
i learned from little books here and there
i also use references mainly from well "informational magazines"
User avatar #71 to #70 - funkyspot (09/30/2013) [-]
That's actually a really good idea, never thought about using magazines
All I use is old medical books, so I never draw any cloths, so I suck at doing that...
Only naked people :I
User avatar #72 to #71 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/30/2013) [-]
can i see some of your works?
#73 to #72 - funkyspot (09/30/2013) [-]
I rarely bother to finish sketches, or even big full page compositions, so I don't have any real "complete-thingy", but I did animate a bunch as a kid, and have started to take it very seriously the past year, so here- www.youtube.com/watch?v=ImwRyvED9PU
What else can you show me? That last picture was really awesome (in a completely non-erotic way)
User avatar #74 to #73 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/30/2013) [-]

you can see my stuff there
#49 to #28 - bilbobagginshield (09/29/2013) [-]
In my middle school we once had to write three different creative stories that had to be at least a page long. everyone in my class only wrote 3 pages of complete crap,and i'm not bragging,it was true,everyone but me wrote about how them and their friends went to the fair and stuff,it was idiotic.So,being the person I am and was,I wrote at least 50 pages each,all stories consisted of rape,gore,cannibalism,mental issues,under-aged sex/drug use,miscarriages,'romance',prostitution,suicide,lobotomies,theft,and all the stories connected together,making it all into one plot,and most of the characters in it were gay,bi,asex,pan,or hetero with illustrations.I was 15.

<--------one of my characters in the story.
User avatar #52 to #49 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
adorable thing it is
wow
HURRAH FOR FREEDOM o SPEECH
#55 to #52 - bilbobagginshield (09/29/2013) [-]
yeah,and the best part was that we HAD to read our stories out to the WHOLE class,and since mine was so long I had to go last,now when I was finished the whole class stared in horror (because my class was filled to the brim,and when I say brim,I mean like a gay porn star getting a butt fill,with idiots) but four people and the teacher stood up and started clapping,those four people are now my bestest friends, Mackenzie,Grace,Kiani, and Matthew,and I got a A+ for all of the hard work,so 			****		 yeah freedom of speech,sadly I was for ever known as class freak,oh well! as if I ever gave a 			****		.
yeah,and the best part was that we HAD to read our stories out to the WHOLE class,and since mine was so long I had to go last,now when I was finished the whole class stared in horror (because my class was filled to the brim,and when I say brim,I mean like a gay porn star getting a butt fill,with idiots) but four people and the teacher stood up and started clapping,those four people are now my bestest friends, Mackenzie,Grace,Kiani, and Matthew,and I got a A+ for all of the hard work,so **** yeah freedom of speech,sadly I was for ever known as class freak,oh well! as if I ever gave a **** .
User avatar #58 to #55 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
because i have poor hand writing i have to read my work to my teacher sometimes, but the work i did was in perfect penmans
i also have terrible eyes and at the time i needed to collect new lenses
so my teacher had to read my work for me
in front of my class, a class of the elite 1st class god tier students known for being of pure innocents (if you look below there is a rough plot summery)
watching their faces going from the glee of classic anime like crush humor to the deepest o_o i have ever seen right before the sex then i saw the entire male population squirm in their chairs clamping their asses and shuffling away from me towards the door and the girls splooshing the god damn floor
#63 to #58 - bilbobagginshield (09/29/2013) [-]
ah,
			
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		classmates mainly consisted of Christians too,oh what fun was it to see them squirm,hehe
ah, You need to login to view this link classmates mainly consisted of Christians too,oh what fun was it to see them squirm,hehe
User avatar #65 to #63 - evilanakie ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
muhuhuhuhuahauhauhaha i was told by one of my class mate "c-can i get a copy of that"
to which i responded "i think we get them back at end of year"
i have still to run up copys... or get it back
#2 - teranin ONLINE (09/28/2013) [-]
tell me more!
tell me more!
#7 - mondprinzessin ONLINE (09/29/2013) [-]
id read it
User avatar #5 - dnavarre (09/29/2013) [-]
Reminds me of George Martin's "A Song for Lya," except his wasn't happy.
#51 - playapplepie (09/29/2013) [-]
Not a single person on Tumblr knows how to use punctuation, and it bothers me greatly.
User avatar #34 - retardedboss (09/29/2013) [-]
That 5th grader probably had better punctuation too.

******* Tumblr.
#42 - anon (09/29/2013) [-]
this isn't funny though
User avatar #38 - omphaloskepsis (09/29/2013) [-]
Everyone's all aggro over the lack of punctuation, and I'm just over here like " **** , now I want hot cocoa."
User avatar #18 - fukkendragonite (09/29/2013) [-]
Use some ******* punctuation, you goddamn ******* eejit.
User avatar #33 - kroople (09/29/2013) [-]
So, are run on sentences the new thing?

If so Im gonna do it too haha its so fun I dont even have to use punctaution at all i feel so alive wow wow wow no periods or commas wooooow
#69 - redteamgriff (09/29/2013) [-]
****** deep, yo.
#32 - brenton (09/29/2013) [-]
The lack of punctuation in that story made me very, very uncomfortable for some reason.
#43 to #32 - majormoron (09/29/2013) [-]
I was going to post this picture, interesting that you happen to use him as your reaction image.
User avatar #44 to #43 - brenton (09/29/2013) [-]
Ha
#30 - crazyolitis (09/29/2013) [-]
That stuff's more original than most of the new literature and movies that comes out.
That stuff's more original than most of the new literature and movies that comes out.
User avatar #26 - zombiebrainss (09/29/2013) [-]
OH my god that's soo adorable!! ^_^
#22 - ronrod (09/29/2013) [-]
And then the coco is stab with a spoon and it's insides are spun round and round before being drank along with it's newly liquid marshmallow...so they both die in the end. Not such a happy ending for that story...
#25 to #22 - musichead (09/29/2013) [-]
Well, it sounds a hell of a lot like Romeo and Juliet.
#20 - hoaxfourtyfour (09/29/2013) [-]
All of FJ's FW the girls assignment is posted.
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