Eternal Rising CYOA (LONG)

#1 - pappalol [OP]

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stickied by pappalol

wew lad

#8 - darcyfoskett

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**** dude I tried, it's just too much to take in. I'm not strong enough.

#9 to #8 - pappalol [OP]

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Its a bit much yeah, im not even done with mine.

#21 to #9 - congthea

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Usually love these cyoa's, but this one was too much for me as well. Nice posts though

#2 - roguekilla

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Holy smokes thats a long one

#6 - gcaboose

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dude I got to the companions and I ******* quit

still good though, 10/10

#17 - ticticboom

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oh boy here we go,
vagabond so ageless protector
final choices leading to these stats

crithinch pet- makes me tougher and wont die until i do (if i do) and can snap me out of illusions cus muh bond love
companions:
Aeron- final quest> thriving order of wyvern knights loyal to me as a paragon founder seems legit
Evie- advanced weaponry, 10 spear defense, final quest> full race of most advanced tech in the world who owe me, yes please
Fie-monster myth lore, shadow magic, final quest ageless vampire princess who I saved as a child, take me now
Orin-positive energy enchanting, elemental magic and flying and hippogriff breeding -my anti air is on point
Mika- Spelunking buddy for dungeoneering

Phoenix disciples+1 infusion for medium size, 5-50 unlimited re-use cus they revive

Chose not to take the thrown

Positive:
rank 3 battlefield protection (hammer time), 3 force of will (tis a scratch),luck of gods 2,

Neutral:
druid partner 1 (dr.dolittle it up), physical and mental training 2 (body 2 hotty +brains), investigative mind 2 (mental and wit for quick decisions), freedom of movement 3 (my allies fly, i jog), complex hybridization 3 (gee billy, 2 wieners), martial training 3 (i can use the wieners), defensive training (you cant hit me with your wiener), one man army (i can take all the wieners ), master craftsman 2 (i have the best wieners)

Negative:
berserk blood 3 (triggered on demand), essence of void 3 (ghosty magic immunity), black dagger training, toxin knowledge, blood thicker than loyalty 2 ( BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD........ME )

All together that makes my character unkillable, unstoppable, immune to magic, unmatched in weapon skill, fastest man alive and impossible to capture, can bane it up for more survivability for myself or a friendly with a headbutt, one man army and blood thicker than loyalty 2 to make me that much more powerful with every slice, complex hybridization combined with other talents lets me defend and attack at all times, master crafting so i can make the best equipment possible, luck of the gods 2 just for extra measure. the only thing that can touch me would be illusions, rank 2 wit mind and body would stop all but the best. Even then anything powerful enough to touch me would be easy to identify and either my allies gtfo or i sit down till its over.

long as **** but good cyoa pappalol , good post

This is my house, don't touch my house or my vampire.
good luck guys, if you write things down you can make some broken setups lol

#12 - millennial

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I don't think the length is the problem, personally. It's just how it's organized. FJ's format doesn't really suit these types of things I guess.
Still, it was pretty cool and one of the more in-depth CYOA I've seen lately.

#10 - blindthedevil

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Sorry if the pictures is small

#11 to #10 - blindthedevil

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Teenage Year....

#14 to #11 - blindthedevil

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Adult Years & Finality of Fate This is a long Cyoa I've Taken

#20 to #14 - pappalol [OP]

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Nicely put together! Yeah this one is the biggest iv seen so far.

#22 - internetexplain

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World Ender (+20 negative [Child])
Schooled - Took lessons serious (+2 negative)
Military training - Joined (+2 negative +1 Fame)
Days of Peace (+3 negative)

Physical Training / Blood thicker than loyalty + Dancing Rose / Strongarm Tactics / Coming Knowledge / Blood of the Berserker / Mental Manipulator / Essence of the Void / Mortal ties / Clerical Training (outer) / Sealed Knowledge + Cursed Aura + Solid Miasma / People's Prince (Free)

Flame Draminth

Peasant Revolt : I resolve the situation peacefully, by using all the negativity radiating from me, to make people less motivated to do anything. My mere presence will cause a general discomfort with the people, and I will use my manipulation skills to make the Peasants see the error in their ways, and the Peasant leaders to swear allegiance to me.
I'd like to think that despite being a peaceful solution, it counts as Forced, because none of these people did this out of their own free will. (+10 negative +5 neutral)

World Ender (+10 negative [Teen])
Diplomatic Tour - Spread name (+2 Fame)
Military Man (+4 Fame for troops only)
Man behind the Ma (-1 Fame cost)

Physical Training / Mental Manipulator / Blood thicker than Loyalty + Permanent Waltz / Essence of Void / Blood of the Berserker / Coming Knowledge / Strongarm Tactics

Defentaz

Child Soldiers : I help the Children by converting them to my cause, though they are enemies, I can easily manipulate them to do my bidding, and soon they are convinced that it was their Families , their Kingdom that has been at fault for all of this all along. I guide them to victory against their own Nation's Troops, securing myself a loyal band of Warriors growing up to serve me. (+8 Negative +1 fame)
Since I used manipulation, I'll count it as Forceful again (+5 Negative +5 Neutral)

World Ender (+15 [Adult])

Physical Training / Blood of the Berserker / Blood Thicker than Loyalty + Personal Trianing / Essence of the Void / People's Prince (Personal Training) [Teen level]

Since I rule the country I guess I get that (+10 fame) for the Throne.

Knights / Guardians / Trained Fighters / Trained Warriors / Draconic Apostle (doubled)

Ho boi now for companions
Charlie (childhood)
Carm (teen)
Borin (adult)
Naturally, I'm a bad influence on them all and the first 2 go down the rebellion route.
And obviously I'll take the Final Quest from each of them, but here's the kicker, since I'm a world ender, I want to go out with a Bang much like Borin, so I kick off an invasion, on every single neighboring country my Kingdom has, and when a new country is discovered, I declare war on that as well, just a massive ******* global invasion during which I'll fulfill all 3 companion quests. I want to go down in history as the Man who united the world, only to see everything collapse upon my death.
And when I return to the world of the living, to find my Empire devastated, I will rekindle the flames and bring back the light, I will bring mankind to it's peak yet again, only to see it fall another time upon my next death.
The cycle repeats, over and over, for all eternity.
Truly the greatest of tragedies.

#19 - anon id: 08a57dca

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Greater Clerical, Magic, Craftsman and Coming Knowledge

#16 - kouzan

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The First Taste of Freedom, where I am King

Wandering Vagabond
+3 Positive Fate Points (+10)
+9 Neutral Fate Points (+10)
+3 Negative Fate Points)
+1 Adult Companion for free, passive. Dane.
Fie upgraded to Adult, Final Quest Unlocked
Zachiel Upgraded to Adult, Final Quest Unlocked
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Adult Training
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Positive Fate Points, 13
Statecraft Apprenticeship, -5 Positive Fate Points (Of 13, 8 remain)
People's Prince, -5 Positive Fate Points (3 remain)
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Neutral Fate Points
Druidic Partnership, -1 Cost from Perks
3 Neutral Fate Points for base version, (Of 19, 16 remain)
Investigative Mind, 4 Neutral Fate Points (12 remain)
Mental Training, 5 Neutral Fate Points (7 Remain)
Call of the Wild, 3 Neutral Fate Points (4 remain)
Teenage version of Complex Hybridisation (All used)
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Negative Fate Points
No Paths available, do not meet point requirements.

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#18 to #16 - kouzan

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Days of Fame
+8 Fame Points
+1 from Past Events

Pezro - 4 Points, from 9. 5 Remain
Florenz - 3 Points, 2 remain
Cilgard (All used)

My Military Might

Arcane Knights - 4, from 9, 5 remain
Primal Druid - 4, 1 remain
Rangers, (All Used)