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#7016 - lemonjuicepacket
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(07/09/2012) [-]
Black paint, sorry for poor quality no scanner. Any thoughts?
#7017 to #7016 - lemonjuicepacket
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(07/09/2012) [-]
Opps, forgot to rotate. Critique?
User avatar #7051 to #7017 - angelasian
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(07/09/2012) [-]
I'm having a hard time understanding the hand (?) on the far right holding the syringe. The facial expression can be one of more fear by widening of the eye and more dramatic eyebrow to imply panic. The creases and wrinkles' shadows should be more consistent in width, unless the variety is intentional. Personally, I think more shadows on the face would also help the mood (panic? fear? trauma?) but I really love the minimalistic idea.

for the record, I'm really nit-picky and my (hopefully constructive) criticism doesn't imply that I can do as well/better.

Hope that helps! :)