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#6153 - iburntthewaffle **User deleted account**
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#6164 to #6153 - Protomix
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(07/03/2012) [-]
>Clean up your lines, they're too shaky.
>Work on how you draw the body. Exxagerated proportions are fine, but yours are a bit sloppy and uneven.
>Thicken the borders around characters and objects, it helps define them and makes it more appealing.
>Ears...enough said
>The arms are offputting. Hinged or noodly, pick one and stick with it
>Other than those things, it's pretty good.
#6171 to #6164 - iburntthewaffle **User deleted account**
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#6219 to #6171 - oceanwaffle
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(07/04/2012) [-]
actually i found that turning down the sensitivity of the mouse helps a lot
#6172 to #6171 - Protomix
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(07/03/2012) [-]
You can do something about the lines quite easily. Download paint tool SAI (you get a month free trial). There's a curve line tool that allows for very smooth and consistent linework, even with a mouse
#6155 to #6153 - anon
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(07/03/2012) [-]
Visible necks help, but otherwise you're fine. try centering your heads a little more.
#6157 to #6155 - iburntthewaffle **User deleted account**
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#6154 to #6153 - hongtonggobblenuts **User deleted account**
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(07/03/2012) [-]
Dude I like the style, go for it.
#6156 to #6154 - iburntthewaffle **User deleted account**
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#6161 to #6156 - hackapelite
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(07/03/2012) [-]
definitely visible necks, not really anything else
#6160 to #6156 - hongtonggobblenuts **User deleted account**
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(07/03/2012) [-]
The anon above is right, you should make necks, and noses. That's just my style. But otherwise, you have potential.
#6165 to #6160 - iburntthewaffle **User deleted account**
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