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#4203 - soggycorn (06/23/2012) [-]
Changed a few things. sorry.

NOW, what do you guys think? I'm gonna wait a while to send it to her, so you guys have a little time to recommend changes. Please please please, constructive criticism. Don't be afraid to hurt my feelings.
#4273 to #4203 - anon (06/23/2012) [-]
Eh... ah... no. It looks like something I made in third grade.
#4303 to #4273 - soggycorn (06/24/2012) [-]
Yeah. Not very proud of this. I'm better with this kind of stuff.
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#4212 to #4209 - soggycorn (06/23/2012) [-]
Alright, Mr Guy Person, is this better?
User avatar #4215 to #4212 - lilin (06/23/2012) [-]
Well, I'm not that guy, but I think a bit of a mistake you both made was in the shading, where you used more of a black tone. It makes it look like half her face is bruised. You should just use a darker skin tone for it, rather than a blacker version.
User avatar #4250 to #4215 - soggycorn (06/23/2012) [-]
Yeah, me too. If I was using pencil it might have been different. I'm going to work on something else because, quite frankly, realistic drawing is not my thing.
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