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#12696 - semiseirous (06/18/2012) [-]
What does the board think of my new drawing? It's still being worked on, but I named him Dante Frost. I might use him in a future comic series.
#12704 to #12696 - lolibear (06/18/2012) [-]
Every time i see a self-drawn picture with only characters, no background, "profile" style shots, that aren't extremely-well crafted, I die a little inside.
User avatar #12707 to #12704 - semiseirous (06/18/2012) [-]
Oi, still learning here. I need to learn poses and shit... *mutters*
#12716 to #12707 - lolibear (06/18/2012) [-]
im not saying you don't have skill. you just don't have skill compared to the fact that there are SOOO many people just like you in almost every school or college.
#12701 to #12696 - rupertthepink (06/18/2012) [-]
Redraw it, those two hairs are out of place...
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User avatar #12705 to #12702 - semiseirous (06/18/2012) [-]
Asymmetrical is SEXY D<
User avatar #12709 to #12705 - rupertthepink (06/18/2012) [-]
Not In the eyes of Death The Kid!
User avatar #12698 to #12696 - technoticacid (06/18/2012) [-]
There's a "Drawing & Art" board.
User avatar #12706 to #12698 - technoticacid (06/18/2012) [-]
But, as long as we're giving out 2 cents:

The face needs some work, it's very small and has little-to-no detail.

The anatomy is somewhat off. The abs need to be placed to where the middle set of abdominals reaches the belly button.

He's wearing a tank top. Why?

All in all, he seems somewhat uninspired. I've seen this too many times.

Give your characters a splash of originality, something that makes them stand out.

Look up the "Maniwa Corps" from Katanagatari. That's a perfect example of unique, outstanding, original characters.

Now, as for the actual drawing skill? Great work. Especially on the wrinkles of the clothes, very nice detail, I'm impressed. You have quite a bit of potential.

#12711 to #12706 - semiseirous (06/18/2012) [-]
Alright, thanks!   
I'm trying my best to improve. I want to have an entire fanbase someday. &gt;:3
Alright, thanks!

I'm trying my best to improve. I want to have an entire fanbase someday. >:3
User avatar #12713 to #12711 - technoticacid (06/18/2012) [-]
Good aspirations, I'm sure you'll get there.
#12700 to #12698 - semiseirous (06/18/2012) [-]
There's also an anime and manga board, this is in manga style.
User avatar #12697 to #12696 - rareultra (06/18/2012) [-]
not bad
User avatar #12699 to #12697 - semiseirous (06/18/2012) [-]
It looks so much better on paper than it does in the scanner. I HATE that.
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