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#28543 - maddboiy
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(09/23/2012) [-]
www.wattpad.com/7139909-gravity-prologue hey can you guys tell me what you think of my short story? I'd really appreciate some feedback.
#28634 to #28543 - mllerayael
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(09/23/2012) [-]
there`s a site that can be really good for feedback if your willing to spend time reading other peoples stuff
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#28551 to #28543 - Jackimole
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(09/23/2012) [-]
Why is the woman wearing a long red dress in the middle of winter?
#28563 to #28551 - maddboiy
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(09/23/2012) [-]
she wears it in all his visions which happen in other chapters.