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#24 - Nazistick (03/02/2014) [-]
Did someone say Bad Oc?
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#75 to #24 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
Humans like these are wasting our time.
Why don't they get killed off sooner?
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#77 to #24 - jarofdirt ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
Comment Picture
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#27 to #24 - thechosentroll (03/02/2014) [-]
No. Shoo! Go away.
No. Shoo! Go away.
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#29 to #27 - Nazistick (03/02/2014) [-]
Dawww But I just wanna hang out with all my fellow bad Oc ponies! Is that so wrong?
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#32 to #31 - Nazistick (03/02/2014) [-]
Fine then. I know when Im not wanted. I'll just go off and spawn more Oc's to engulf equestria in an eternity of Darkness, Blight, Destruction, Madness and Marry Sues.
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#33 to #32 - thechosentroll (03/02/2014) [-]
As long as it involves leaving, I'm perfectly fine with it.
As long as it involves leaving, I'm perfectly fine with it.
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#36 to #32 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
Play time is ogre, ***********
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User avatar #37 to #36 - Nazistick (03/02/2014) [-]
Hey now, Dont bring your mom into this.
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#61 to #37 - tanstin (03/02/2014) [-]
Now thats ogre the line, boy.
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#46 to #37 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
Take your ponies and **** off you god damn faggot.
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#86 to #47 - drmedic (03/02/2014) [-]
This is just too fun to watch.
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#51 to #47 - redstonealchemist (03/02/2014) [-]
You're in over your head, Trollfag.
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User avatar #108 to #47 - chrispoot (03/03/2014) [-]
Oh come ON, people like you are why bronies are increasingly being hated
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User avatar #1 - sayonarazetsubou ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
For a second, I thought that this was some pathetic self-insert fan comic posted just to make us cringe. Needless to say, I'm glad it didn't turn out that way.
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User avatar #35 to #1 - ompalomper ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
these are the rules of thumb i have found about fanfictions

1. if it exists, there are a hundred naruto crossover with it
2. all frozen fanfictions are incest pairings
3. the more obscure the crossover, the worse its fanfics are written
4. there is no DBZ OC that isn't a mary sue
5. for every good or even descent fanfic there is a lake of **** around it
6. every character ever has or will be crossover'ed with "familiar of zero"

i will most likely find more rules but these are the ones i can think of at the top of my head
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User avatar #67 to #35 - fistymcbeefpunch ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
Here's one:
Only about 1% of fanfictions are any good.
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User avatar #3 - yveinesteele ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
"Ivory black"

are you ******* kidding me?
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User avatar #4 to #3 - kopn (03/02/2014) [-]
"She was half Saiyajin, half Namekian and half Milathorongian"
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#12 to #4 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
or was she really half man half bear half pig, but in disquise
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User avatar #26 to #4 - Blargosnarf (03/02/2014) [-]
That... took me an embarrassingly long time to realize. I need to wake up more.
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User avatar #17 to #5 - robotvoice (03/02/2014) [-]
mary sues arent people so that would be beastiality.
thats gross dude.
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User avatar #8 to #5 - zerpderp (03/02/2014) [-]
still warm so you can do both
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#10 to #8 - seboultura (03/02/2014) [-]
i like this idea bro
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#45 - CakemanRPG (03/02/2014) [-]
My Immortal - Part 1 - Chapters 1 to 4

a dramatic reading of the most infamous mary sue
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#70 to #45 - hurrdehurrhurr (03/02/2014) [-]
I was skeptic but holy **** that was funny
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User avatar #72 to #45 - guiguito (03/02/2014) [-]
what is a mary sue? i am not exactly into roleplaying if you catch my drift
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User avatar #102 to #72 - nustix (03/03/2014) [-]
Mary sue is not about roleplaying but writing stories.
Your character being a mary sue means that you put yourself as the main character and makes the world revolve around them by either being a god with super powers or making them the most impopular being in the world (like in this story) there's different ways to achieve it but when you read a story with a mary sue you will recognize it.
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#95 to #72 - CakemanRPG (03/02/2014) [-]
it is a term to describe a protagonist character which the author, a person so obsessed with a fictional universe (one which they may/may not have created) compulsively create a fictional character to project themselves into in order to be a part of said universe. Mary Sues are the fundamental protagonists of every single fan fic/ ****** webcomic. Unlike Urban DIctionary's definition, this can relate to both male and females. In character design, Mary Sues are perfect in every single way. SO perfect that it is ******* irritating.
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User avatar #109 to #95 - guiguito (03/03/2014) [-]
I see... seems disturbing.
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#79 to #45 - huntergriff ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
Comment Picture
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#101 to #45 - crosskill (03/03/2014) [-]
> "I was a little depressed, so I slit one of my wrists."

Oh **** , I can't stop.
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#106 to #45 - mrsexmuffins (03/03/2014) [-]
I hurt. I hurt so bad because of this. Why must you hurt me like this.
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User avatar #54 to #45 - thechosentroll (03/02/2014) [-]
There is no force in the universe capable of making me click that.
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#55 to #54 - CakemanRPG (03/02/2014) [-]
Here's what you're missing goth vampire emo seventh year in hogwarts where every student is goth wastes 50% of text describing her wardrobe the guy doing the dramatic reading is trying very, very hard not to laugh. text is clearly written by uneducated scenekore 12/14 year old Itz gr4mmer iz writt3n lyk t3xtz believe me, you will actually spend most of your time laughing your ass off than being scarred for life but its up to you. I won't persuade you into clicking the link.
Here's what you're missing
goth vampire emo seventh year in hogwarts where every student is goth
wastes 50% of text describing her wardrobe
the guy doing the dramatic reading is trying very, very hard not to laugh.
text is clearly written by uneducated scenekore 12/14 year old
Itz gr4mmer iz writt3n lyk t3xtz

believe me, you will actually spend most of your time laughing your ass off than being scarred for life
but its up to you. I won't persuade you into clicking the link.
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User avatar #64 to #55 - zedacedia (03/02/2014) [-]
you forgot "And then he put his thingie into my you know what and we did it for the first time"
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User avatar #87 to #64 - dumbasshunter (03/02/2014) [-]
as welll as

"what the hell are you doing you ************ !" it was.................DUMBLEDORE!!!
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User avatar #56 to #55 - thechosentroll (03/02/2014) [-]
Eeeeeeeeeeh, I'm not too big of a fan of cringing so hard your skull implodes. Pass.
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#57 to #56 - CakemanRPG (03/02/2014) [-]
good call. almost everyone who have read it wasted 45 minutes of their lives giving the author negative feedback.
good call. almost everyone who have read it wasted 45 minutes of their lives giving the author negative feedback.
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#59 to #57 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
I find that fanfic hilarious, but only read it till chapter 13. Then it started to repeat too much.

But even the first few chapters are a must-read, along with Denko-story and the world's longest joke. Internet sure is weird place.
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User avatar #93 to #59 - spanishiqiustion (03/02/2014) [-]
worlds longest joke?
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User avatar #92 to #55 - elbrysobrony (03/02/2014) [-]
I swear to **** , the author is writing that as satire...
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User avatar #63 to #54 - varrlegrimscythe ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
I couldn't even last 15 seconds.
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User avatar #100 to #63 - dumbasshunter (03/03/2014) [-]
i have tortured myself....im on part 5
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User avatar #89 to #45 - amaezin (03/02/2014) [-]
Ah man thanks for sharing this... It's like a lovely car accident
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#7 - thekeeperofthumbs ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
Lol, feminists getting analdevastated
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#11 to #7 - pedobearson (03/02/2014) [-]
Reading that make me so angry.
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User avatar #13 to #7 - muslims (03/02/2014) [-]
There is a term for overpowered males as well. "Gary-Drews" I think.
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#38 to #13 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
It's Gary-Stu.
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User avatar #40 to #38 - muslims (03/02/2014) [-]
Close enough
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User avatar #16 to #7 - bigblacknegro (03/02/2014) [-]
now i understand the comic. thanks
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User avatar #19 to #16 - thekeeperofthumbs ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
That isn't actually the definition just in case you weren't aware
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User avatar #21 to #19 - bigblacknegro (03/02/2014) [-]
mary-sues are overpowered females i assume?
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User avatar #30 to #21 - thechosentroll (03/02/2014) [-]
Actually, it applies to both genders. It's just called "Mary-sue" after a character of the same name. it doesn't only apply to overpoweredness, either. It's mostly used to describe characters who are seemingly perfect. A Mary-sue can be defined by its' amazing looks, kind heart, 17 different natural talents, astonishing learning capabilities and so on and so forth. Basically, any character that's unrealistically perfect is a Mary-sue.
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User avatar #25 to #21 - thekeeperofthumbs ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
Yes.
With that in mind, reread the post.
Overpowered characters in general are hated as it means that the author is lazy. This is because he/she can't be bothered to add in some realism, or allow for, say, strategy in battle.
"lol who cares about skill this baby witch girl obliterates the enemy with some lasers and **** she can't yet control"
"The plot is how she gets even more unnecessarily overkill stronger"
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User avatar #20 to #19 - bigblacknegro (03/02/2014) [-]
but it makes more sense.
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User avatar #97 to #20 - BlizzXonetwothree ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
And the thing is too, Mary-Sue's have an element of author insertion. They aren't just over powered to be over powered, they can also be very obviously the author wanting to put themselves in the story, so they of course have to be the best character. There's Mary-Sue litmus tests out there for authors trying to avoid it. One such book that fails it is Twilight.
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User avatar #28 to #7 - thechosentroll (03/02/2014) [-]
I read 3 words and gave up. I know this is just rage-bait.
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#34 - iamsquid (03/02/2014) [-]
MFW 'Ivory Black'
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#73 - seras (03/02/2014) [-]
Half sayan, half namekian and half milathoramalamadingdong?
How?
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User avatar #76 to #73 - warwolfrider (03/02/2014) [-]
fusion is the only way it would work because of the half namekian but i have no idea how the **** or wth a milathoramalamadingdong is wtf is that a murloc or something
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User avatar #80 to #76 - seras (03/02/2014) [-]
It's an invention by the writer. In the content it's explained. It can everything.
My problem is half+half+half does not work. Even with fusion. It should be quarter+quarter+half.
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#82 to #80 - warwolfrider (03/02/2014) [-]
Like eminater said "Everyone knows 3 halfs make a whole"
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User avatar #94 to #73 - woofman ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
The same way manbearpig was made.
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#83 to #73 - amuzen (03/02/2014) [-]
In D&D 3.5 you could add a half dragon template to a race for 3 levels and a half fiend template for 4 so one of my characters was a half fiend half dragon half elf half human and one of his catch phrases was to say how he was going to give it 200% because he was 200% stuff.
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User avatar #62 - eminater (03/02/2014) [-]
Everyone knows 3 halfs make a whole
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#15 - madcoww (03/02/2014) [-]
Don't steal plz
DBZ and MLP are each enjoyable in their own unique way
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User avatar #22 to #15 - learnthisline (03/02/2014) [-]
How has this got anything to do with ponies?
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#23 to #22 - madcoww (03/02/2014) [-]
bad mary sue OC's are a plague on the mlp too, perhaps to an ever greater extent
bad mary sue OC's are a plague on the mlp too, perhaps to an ever greater extent
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User avatar #53 to #23 - redstonealchemist (03/02/2014) [-]
i forgot to mention: i don't write fanfic
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#52 to #23 - redstonealchemist (03/02/2014) [-]
i just found out that my self-made character for MLP is a mary sue, but the kind that's like "oh ok, i'll just go... uh oh..." more like a side-story character than anything. like how Derpy Hooves says only a few words over the span of three seasons despite being in almost every episode ever made.
i call my pony-self "Cherry Liquorish" because i couldn't come up with anything better
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#14 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
o_o... This cringe fan-fic gave her immediate regeneration... :I
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User avatar #110 - brobafett (10/28/2015) [-]
Isn't most anime about mary sues?
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#96 - chancevance (03/02/2014) [-]
This is why I preferred creation of my own fiction for my stories. I started my guy off as a Mary Sue lookalike but then people realize that underneath all that he's ******************* .

If you actually read my stories, that's not really a spoiler.
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User avatar #88 - thenewgizmobox (03/02/2014) [-]
you know... you can only be half of so many things....
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User avatar #90 to #88 - kanatana (03/02/2014) [-]
... That's the joke...
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User avatar #91 to #90 - thenewgizmobox (03/02/2014) [-]
....i know...
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#85 - anon (03/02/2014) [-]
The little kids on this sight that don't know what the term "Mary Sue" means.
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User avatar #74 - hybredmoon (03/02/2014) [-]
Yay for knowing enough about literature to know what a mary sue is!
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User avatar #69 - itsmepapaone (03/02/2014) [-]
I'm in the Naruto roleplaying community.

******* Mary Sues/Gary Stus everywhere.
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User avatar #68 - bakinboy ONLINE (03/02/2014) [-]
what's a mary sue?
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User avatar #98 to #71 - deadmansdope (03/02/2014) [-]
You don't have to be a dick about it.
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User avatar #78 to #71 - warwolfrider (03/02/2014) [-]
WHAT WAS THAT
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User avatar #60 - tittylovin (03/02/2014) [-]
Can someone give me the source on this? FJ is acting up today and refuses to load beyond the first two panels.
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