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D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 1153 No 22412183
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siply great strength
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subterfuge
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 11 as No 22412204
We four ammy easyer benefits , and as me began to oaee a stronghold
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godhood A century passed before mm eae wth our Candel, but l took anothergun before our
plan eae ready to be mohin
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number truths about the Sods, none ofthem eyee
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yew blank books nuts offput But beyond that, he eae istant, only appearing came
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becoming the the ffeature eae truly what eae best for Nature, and there were many Mme: that y eyee
my power ewe aee upon mm
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 11 59 No 22412238
mm spent we Mme our stronghold we occasionally wake up, an down the
mountai, fight ye ara/ able, , and then get resurrected and any back to sleep
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only eeyy towards reasonable mistakes y couldnt make someone aee ye runnang
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aee geeh , Knowledge, Nature, and Been
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hymn aee much they ewe Interfere wth our plans By reducing the amount swallowers ofthose
four Sods, we ewe then proceed to form aee that worshiped partiular aspects of
the Sods, wth those aspects esyeg us
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whey cultures Plath, ye not payee any ye the the he served, eae absent from yeye
That eae also geeh for another reason, as we slaughtered many people awey: of
Innocence aee genuinely yeyey nature
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 11 59 No 22412249
eae danng our last that we encountered another emmygee‘ aee that tnod to appose us my
army eae beset by all manner , and we would aaye been routed had not siply marched
singlehandedly yeye the enemy camp and crushed the enemy emmygee by throuhg a eyees at mm To our
geeh fortune, the emmygee surfed, ayebyy wth eye body ye shambles, and any submenu mm to same
Edema: Handeling dragged mm back to the Lore
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rattly we had been commanded by eye the to do what he ewe forthe yeyeyeyey worshipers, and ye
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tree wth a large eye at the center UM: trunk
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actually detract from geegwee worser)
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offere eae small already, but y yeyey l eae more ofa oaee these eyees aaye
a large enough Infuence, and perhaps that priming them wth funds we actually managed to
reduce them to yeayea
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 12 No 22412260
Those yeyey were not wasted, however we had gathered a decent sue following, especially
any mm ye a aee mantle helped defend from the remnants mun! old army we a
substances amount , we a aee power, the to speed up the growth of
trees from was to mere ewe ye wth the to immatu them, we ewe create a
small army wherever he wanted one, but he had same about esyeg so He eyees yeyey l eae
eyee to the forces ffeature, and we agreed to not eyees our luck wth forces we werent ye
complete control of
Handeling had also been rather busy we the body under constant
and a number heyeyea around the clock en It, he had made major
breakthroughs ye esyeg able to transfer eyees essence from aee person to another Though heyeyea truly
usefulness yet, but Handeling praised us results by the aee ofthe century
We put Been en the backburner, and l would be a geeh Mme to focus en reducing the the of
Knowledge' s power Handeling went about yeye ye a {awe manner, by gang to oaee ofthe
great schools and all ofthe teachers' mods, seeking out the most people we my
ad, we managed to them that they eyees actually want to teach anyone, but to coninue
them elsewhere We an academy ifall the mods, and wth both Handeling
and y heyeyea haplessly, slowly pushed them towards yeyeye that would help our goals
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 12 83 No 22412281
The yeyeyeye aee refused yeyey us, eyee any y tnod to persuade them and Handeling tnod to aee eye
knowledge secretest blackmage them, were siply removed Afterparty years, the
decrease ye eduction and general knowledge eae , and Handeling eae summoned to a
grand ofthe the acknowledge and all ofthe that served mm
Handeling eae spared any blame thanks to mm esyeg helped found aee ofthe last of
knowledge, eyee though our academy eae more may Intellectual than anyting eyee enemy
enough Informaton my mm to act, the the ended the upon anyting
The eye however prove rather useful to us, as Handeling uncovered an opponent ye the form ofa
emmygee named
eae correct ye Handeling eae actually heyeyea the the , but
Handeling eae adept at playig the fool By the aee ofthe meanng, Mallon' s accessions
had accomplised heyeyea but yeyeye Handyman to mark mm down as the second emmygee to be added to
eye
The capture went almost too smoothly Though has Immune to our powers aee to eye
he had chosen to we a lfe amongst mortals, and had eyee chosen a mortal wfe Handeling
managed to approach eey and read through eey memories, oaee ' s weaknesses
Handeling also asked for we to try and eey away from and towards maself, but y
told mm that y fa/ ed, as y ewe he yeyey y eae weak incorperate
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 12 or No 22412328
ye the end, a emmygee whose only to read books at an rate proved to be a rather
any capture we the aye ofthe knowledge taken from eye wfe, mm managed to sneak yeye Mallon' s
keep and subdue mm much trouble Once eae sedated and brought back to our Candel,
Handeling began to experment
Handeling eae busy ye our dungeons, and we eae followers beneath
the banner ofthe [ tree, mm and y yeea out to aee ewe general chaos mm needed to spread
the eyee away ye appease the the he served, WWW y had to figure out do someting
construable wth my we ye the end, awey ended up generals aee wanted peace that the only
way they could eeyore l eae by attacking all potenial threats around them Somehow, yeye
Irony eyees paticularly we ye any way
traveler wth Gorg, y found out that he eyees paticularly trust Handeling eye winage
to figure out a way to transfer , mm feared that Handeling wygmy aee day try and take away our
powers Hume yeye to be a rather Idea, but y told mm not to worry, eyees tnod to
betray us, at the yee beastie could warn the Greater thee to yeye whatever plan he had yeye eye not
new to comfort Gorg, but eye way through an enemy army eye new to calm eye nerves
somewhat
D Anonymousmkii/ 13( Sat) 12 88 No 22412351
At the aee ofthe century, Handeling made geeh en eye ‘ and showed us the up form of
The youthful appearance ofa emmygee had been taken from mm, and he never awake
from the sleep Handeling had placed mm under, esyeg ewe was yeyeyeyeye underlie aaye offs wfe
But, none offs spared a thought for our enemy, eyees Handeling eye by rattly
yeyeyey a noyer ye the span ofa theeye Both mm and y were rather Impressed, and we
that other would be our current task forthe next few yeeyeeyee
ween we returned from eye Randene's, we condenced mm to theeye the eyees essence ofthe anyway
controlling emmygee we had captured soling age we those powers added to eye own, we eae truly a
formidable force, and the cult yeeyeeyee to mm Munched under eye protectin Upon that heyyey
pointy eae other ‘ we agreed wth mm that we should try and capture a servant of
the the offar
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#4 - TheBoganglers (11/23/2015) [-]
11/10 I needed a good, interesting read.    
   
The problem is that I now require a sequel. And for Hollywood to make this into a movie.
11/10 I needed a good, interesting read.

The problem is that I now require a sequel. And for Hollywood to make this into a movie.
User avatar #7 to #4 - coledunk (11/23/2015) [-]
I think a tv show would be better suited, then you wouldn't have to rush through it and could expand their actions
User avatar #26 to #7 - syrenthra (11/24/2015) [-]
or give us a series of movies, one could definitely end with Cym going to sleep.
User avatar #42 to #26 - coledunk (11/24/2015) [-]
that's definitely a possible option as well.
User avatar #55 to #42 - zayinzetaseven (11/24/2015) [-]
this is very easily a thing....one of us could simply email or use some form of social media towards a movie production company and if they think its worth or even care they will snag it
User avatar #57 to #55 - coledunk (11/24/2015) [-]
something that came up while I was thinking about this was whoever decided to make the show or movies would most likely have to find who posted this and cut them in, because it technically belongs to them unless by telling the story on 4chan they gave up their rights to it. I'm worried the legal hassle might be enough to not touch it.
User avatar #1 - memexicano (11/23/2015) [-]
Oh yeah bby
10/10 would spend another hour reading it again
User avatar #2 to #1 - peezle [OP](11/23/2015) [-]
They never did find out what system he used either.
User avatar #15 to #2 - kasperfage (11/23/2015) [-]
there is a good to fair chance from what i can see that this system less or something close to, which is terrific if you are experienced enough something i'd fully believe these people here are
#43 to #15 - sengenjin (11/24/2015) [-]
Da **** did you just try to say?
User avatar #52 to #43 - zayinzetaseven (11/24/2015) [-]
i think he tried to say it was a systemless system
User avatar #49 to #43 - memexicano (11/24/2015) [-]
I dunk know D:
User avatar #6 - paraxo (11/23/2015) [-]
Im supposed to be up and ready for **** today

I havent even taken a shower, or left the bed even
Worth it
User avatar #16 to #6 - kasperfage (11/23/2015) [-]
same here, i spent a bit over an hour reading this, and i started 10mins before i should have been asleep, but damn was it worth it!
User avatar #8 - coledunk (11/23/2015) [-]
half way through I was ready for some ******** meme but at that point I didn't care because the concept alone was ******* awesome
User avatar #5 - thetickledpickle (11/23/2015) [-]
My new absolute favorite 4chin text post
User avatar #3 - tacotrainone (11/23/2015) [-]
ho-ly **** that was cool. worth the read 10/10
#21 to #20 - halcyonix (11/23/2015) [-]
peezle

Mind giving us a drop box link or something with all these files in a .zip?
User avatar #9 - liuur (11/23/2015) [-]
Already read it but thumbing so others will.
User avatar #32 to #9 - fluttergrey (11/24/2015) [-]
Yeah, it's been a while since I saw this one posted. Nearly forgot it existed. Strange how reading only the first couple of posts triggers all the memories back suddenly.
User avatar #14 - timmywankenobi (11/23/2015) [-]
Interesting story , But it all seems to hinge on the fact that greater gods can't see things being plotted in the mortal world , even though the writer repeatedly state they can.

Also why would demigods be filled with mortal flaws ?

And why would greater gods reward greed ?

why was every singe character in the story devoid of any sort of morality or compassion even the gods ?

Why were the demi-gods of knowledge not able to garner knowledge of good and evil ?
why would greater gods reward such ignorance ?

wont the new gods be replaced themselves in a 1000 year by their demi-gods and thus their quest for power ultimately pointless ?
#23 to #14 - Anynymouse (11/23/2015) [-]
The Gods cannot directly see what is happening, they rely on information given to them through the demigods.

Because they're half mortal, so they are flawed.

Because the Demigods spin it as dedication to their cause. The only god who can see what you are really trying to do (Like killing off a god to obtain their powers) is the God of Desire, who it's revealed in the story mostly keeps to himself.

Pleth had many misgivings about helping the others and expressed early on that him becoming the God of Nature might not be the best thing for what he so loved. Handelhan falls for a mortal woman and throws aside his compassion to give her what he considers to be a gift of eternal life and godhood. As far as the Gods are concerned, they see things on a universal level and they don't have room for compassion.

Good and evil are subjective concepts that differ from person to person. one person might see stealing as a neccesity, while another might find it morally wrong. Thus, it's hard to garner absolute knowledge on.
They don't reward ignorance, they reward dedication to the cause in order to gain further knowledge.

Enjoy the ******* story man. everyone else does. you're the kind of guy that didn't like Gran Torino.
User avatar #41 to #23 - timmywankenobi (11/24/2015) [-]
"The Gods cannot directly see what is happening, they rely on information given to them through the demigods." - Since ******* when ? I have read mythologies of dozens of cultures and in all of them the gods can see mortals and hear mortals by peering through the very fabric of time and space itself . A prime example of this is Odin the all-sighted, All-father. He can see every single mortal in Midgard as can his gate guardian Heimdal. But by making a deal with powerful witches Odin Gained the power to see the past and the future as well, even the ones that don't happen.


" Handelhan falls for a mortal woman and throws aside his compassion to give her what he considers to be a gift of eternal life and godhood." - he threw away compassion long before that when he murdered and tortured other demi god in his quest for power.

I find it telling and odd this this pantheon has no gods for Honesty,Kindness,Generosity,Mercy or friendship.

"Because they're half mortal, so they are flawed. "- exactly so why would gods want beings so greedy and flawed among them ? do you think the lust for power just stops ?

no it grows.

With the **** these guys were pulling they should have logically been giving tons of power to the god of greed and lust the entire time !
since they were basically worshiping him/her, through their actions !

no matter how strong they got they would be making the god of lust and greed stronger then them the whole time .


"Good and evil are subjective"- murdering people in cold blood out of greed is not subjective to 98% of people.

"They don't reward ignorance, they reward dedication to the cause in order to gain further knowledge. "- their cause was greed , thus the only god who would want to reward them would be the god of greed as they would have feed him tons of power through their witless devotion.

Logically the god of greed/lust would have been so strong by the end of the story he could have taken out all the other gods and taken their powers for himself (being the god of greed and all)

"you're the kind of guy that didn't like Gran Torino"- Actually I quite enjoyed Gran Torino.

There are major flaws in the story that should have been addressed.
#48 to #41 - cheshirethejack (11/24/2015) [-]
Okay first off your first premise is flawed as it requires assumptions as to the nature of the powers of these gods outside of what is implied. This is a setting generated by a group of people therefore the powers of the gods in this setting are mutable. Also if you had actually read any myths you'd realize gods with those powers, aside from monotheistic worship, generally are portrayed as strange hags or in the case of Odin requiring the sacrifice of his ******* eye. Beyond that Odin still used his ravens too learn of the world. Also if we are going off this assumption then it is very easy to realize of course these gods don't need to be moral. There is story after story after story of gods tormenting mortals for stupid selfish reasons. Most polytheistic religions attribute many human faults to their gods and use them as foibles to the associated thing being praised. Such as pride for the god of knowledge or paranoia to the god of the home.

He threw away compassion when he tortured people? Like how all the great kings of old used? Have you ever seen a brass bull? Or like how the glorious George W. Bush slaughtered a group of british soldiers on freaking Christmas? Good and evil are subjective and determined by the person who wins usually. Beyond that "gods" are generally beyond such petty small things, otherwise how could a god of war be moral when their entire existence is dedicated to death and pain in horrible manners. It can also be reasonably stated that the previous gods could somehow be deficient, especially in the case of Desire with the whole "nice job for making slavery and unquenchable desire".

By your logic the fact I desire a bagel right now would give the god of desire power and transitively everyone would worship the god of desire even ascetics as they desire to not partake in desires. But as the god of desire is not as such it can be determined it requires a specific formalization in order to truly give worship.

If you didn't pick up on their dedication to their cause you are a fool who doesn't know how to analyze literature for motivations. Inability to properly determine or understand multidimensional motivations is often attributed to the Autistic category of learning disabilities. Perchance do you have aspergers?
User avatar #59 to #48 - timmywankenobi (11/24/2015) [-]
"Okay first off your first premise is flawed as it requires assumptions as to the nature of the powers of these gods outside of what is implied."- that's not a flaw in my logic it's a flaw in theirs , given a god of desire exist it's only logical that gods for other such feelings would exist especially more prevalent ones like lust/greed/gluttony.

"This is a setting generated by a group of people therefore the powers of the gods in this setting are mutable"- in other words ignore glaring plot holes cause their retarded ?

"Also if you had actually read any myths you'd realize gods with those powers, aside from monotheistic worship, generally are portrayed as strange hags or in the case of Odin requiring the sacrifice of his ******* eye. "- he sacrificed his eye for the power to see the past and the future he could see any mortal on any plane already.
So unlike in this story the "Herp derp the gods can't see us because were inside a castle " makes no sense any major god would be able to see through the fabric of space but a rock wall can stop them ?
what god would a god that can't see or hear their followers be ?

"the glorious George W. Bush slaughtered a group of British soldiers on freaking Christmas"- that was General George Washington.
" Good and evil are subjective and determined by the person who wins usually."- you are mistaking winning a fight for being right , you can win a fight and still be morally wrong.

" how could a god of war be moral when their entire existence is dedicated to death and pain in horrible manners."- the god of war has no morals at all he never claims to in any mythology , the god of war simply loves to fight and wants to fight forever.

It can also be reasonably stated that the previous gods could somehow be deficient, especially in the case of Desire with the whole "nice job for making slavery and unquenchable desire". - yes this is possible but why would the higher god/gods create such deficient gods to serve them ?

"By your logic the fact I desire a bagel right now would give the god of desire power and transitively everyone would worship the god of desire even ascetics as they desire to not partake in desires. "- not at all you moron , they did act in the interest of greed to gain more power (they were not content with the power of demi gods) so yes by taking actions in the name of power lust you feed the god of greed, killing other demi gods in the name of greed feeds the god of greed.


"If you didn't pick up on their dedication to their cause you are a fool who doesn't know how to analyze literature for motivations"- Their cause was to steal the powers and murder their benefactors/creators IE. Greed, Envy, Lust.

It's no different from murdering your father/causing his death so you can own the family house and assets.

'Inability to properly determine or understand multidimensional motivations is often attributed to the Autistic category of learning disabilities. "- I understand their motivation just fine its Greed,Envy and Lust.
#18 - anythingoes (11/23/2015) [-]
My problem with this is the fact that the wannabe god of knowledge pretty much carried the whole story.

Meanwhile, our first perspective protagonist was pretty much second fiddle to everyone. His biggest points in the history were mostly him being the burden.
User avatar #34 to #18 - diroccodoodleedoo (11/24/2015) [-]
I felt similarly. While the story was great, and I have no problem with having an under-powered protagonist, I wished Cym's Imma use that name I guess powers developed more interestingly. I was kinda bummed when I found out that he survived due to the story of Cym the Fire-eater, I thought it was because of his role in kickstarting the cult of desire even here the writer gave him too little credit, for once it should have been, "yup, that **** was all me, and all the other demigods just leeched onto what I stated" instead of him just getting the ball rolling as always . The story of the Man of Many Colors remember how he wore a different colored cloak in each town should have been the legend that kept him alive. This, combined with his experience with resisting the god of desire and his later spreading of a philosophy of contentment, made me think he was going to end up transcending the whole desire concept into a new area of godhood, like a god of enlightenment or fulfillment or something.
#35 to #34 - anythingoes (11/24/2015) [-]
Exactly! That's what makes it so underwhelming. We're reaching the climax, everything is going down hill, and then, "Oh, hello. It is I. The wanna be god of knowledge that developed all the plot points, a created almost all of the plans that have driven us so far. How was all that fighting, and god power stealing working for you guys? Oh, what? No, no, no. I did not hope that you guys would survive, I worked really hard on you guys dying so you could get here! If you were smart like me you would've gotten here soon, but anyhow, here's the rest of the plan..."

It all felt so simple, and single handed. Wannabe god of knowledge carried everyone through, everyone else was just going through the motions. May as well as have been NPCs in his game.

And at no point the protagonist actually resisted the god of desire, he simply had already done it's wishes without it noticing. And the man of many colors thing wouldn't stick because the big GoD had another disciple in place and a lot of reasons for wishing that Cym didn't get to be worshiped anymore.
#44 to #35 - cheshirethejack (11/24/2015) [-]
I'm gonna just put int he "well actually" here.

In the story after the god of desire is snubbed out Cym is instated as the new god and the garden, "no longer loud and tropical, it was a serene glade". So in fact it is implied he transcended the greedy lascivious desire that had previously been the major force.

Now on to my actual reply this type of story is around a supporting protagonist, to be honest this is due to happenstance but in actuality it gives an interesting perspective. Cym is the only god to actively interact with every other demigod and is also the most underpowered. Han did seem to produce most of the plans but in actuality did very little to the actual story. His plans relied on the brawn, Qorg, and the moral authority, Pleth and to a lesser extent Cym. This is because Cym while being a supporting protagonist also happens to be the lynchpin to the entire story. He is the one who convinced everyone to follow "Han's folly", he made the bubble of desire, he is the one who transformed Han's wife and he is the only one who actually resisted his gods power obth in the garden through "false enlightenment" and in the end by denying what the other god desired. That would be as if Qorg not only beat the God of War but forced him to surrender as well. He mediated his entire existence on the nature of desire as shown through the narrative and as a result gained true mastery of desire regardless of any stolen power. That combined with a genuine absorbence of the story that sustained him via eating the fire demigod allows him to ascend and complete the plan Han set up. Han as the one in charge of knowledge is the best bet for plans but he actually did very little by way of enacting his plans instead always relying on others.

To be honest I would have liked it better if it were about the Man of Many Colours that kept him alive but the one with the fire is more believable due to the aforementioned hindrance from the God of Desire.

So yeah Cym is underpowered, but he is the only one asides from maybe Pleth who truly mastered his concept. Even in the end when the other gods dismiss him it is simply par for the course as the previous god of desire was not thought much of either. Cym did not take the path that was easiest to fulfill a misguided desire, power, by turning in his fellows. Nor did he demand essence of other gods over his comrades on his path towards desire. Instead he faced the gross lust of the previous god, reaching "false enlightenment" via satisfaction of the previous god's desire. He then spread through the world the antidote to the poison he himself had sown in the land. Thus Cym while being weak, while being seemingly unimportant, is the only god, aside from Han who mastered their god and the only one who evolved his Aspect into a purer form.
#30 - tulimarito (11/24/2015) [-]
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This ... This **** right here doesn't deserve a ***** Hollywood movie. It deserves a book series. A story this godly ( hehe ) cant be compressed in 2 hours of filming. It needs the detailed writing only a novel can offer.

Greater godhood / Barely godhood, would read again... in some years in the form of a book preferably.
User avatar #40 to #30 - cormy (11/24/2015) [-]
But... It's good as is and isn't anywhere neard the length of a book series.
Yes, it could be expanded but I think it's movie-doable.
User avatar #46 to #40 - supahsayin (11/24/2015) [-]
I think it being put into a mini-series would do it the most justice.
#56 to #46 - zayinzetaseven (11/24/2015) [-]
**zayinzetaseven used "*roll picture*"**
**zayinzetaseven rolled image**more like a three or four part movie series an hour an a half to two hours long with some pre-character development. Maybe splitting up into four or five major parts or maybe even showing what happened in the time desirebro Cym was asleep in detail instead of recapping it all over the period of a few minutes.
User avatar #11 - tropenthatshtup (11/23/2015) [-]
I remember this one. Definitely worth the read when you have the time.
#38 - squidamon (11/24/2015) [-]
Better than most novels
User avatar #13 - ulash (11/23/2015) [-]
quite possibly the best thing from 4chan
User avatar #10 - lycoris (11/23/2015) [-]
Commenting to read later.
User avatar #17 to #10 - kasperfage (11/23/2015) [-]
takes an hour ish, but so, so worth it
#37 - zekeon (11/24/2015) [-]
Animated series please.

Or CGI movies.
User avatar #31 - derpwolf ONLINE (11/24/2015) [-]
I was in a campaign that had a similar premise. I already wrote it all down in this thread /Doot/funny-pictures/5738440/23#23 if you want to read the story of Zepharine, Demigoddess of Boccob, Mother of Golems. It was, uh... an experience. Not quite as grand in scale as theirs, but that's because the other players were really slow and wanted to micromanage nearly everything they did, whereas my plans needed years and years of research.
User avatar #29 - banwagon (11/24/2015) [-]
yes! i have been searching for this for sooooo long!
#22 - brokenboulevard (11/23/2015) [-]
tl;dr

Should I read?

pic is not related
User avatar #24 to #22 - roxasbaby (11/24/2015) [-]
yes, if you got some time on your hands.
User avatar #25 to #22 - syrenthra (11/24/2015) [-]
Took about an hour but so worth it, especially after playing Skyforge... now I kinda wanna get back into it and become a god
#28 to #22 - redwolfjarrus (11/24/2015) [-]
yes
User avatar #12 - ventruss (11/23/2015) [-]
Amazing read. Would definitely read again. Would have loved to have been a player in such a setting.
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