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#7
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norkasthethird (01/07/2016) [-] >child of heroes
>>Alkoth
>>>Falcon's Speed
>>>Grace of the Deer
>>>Perfect Aim
>>>Blademaster
>>>Colossus Hunter
>>>>Boomstick
>>>>>Saorna
>>>>>>A Divine Affair
>>>>>>Door to Door
gotta go fast
>>Alkoth
>>>Falcon's Speed
>>>Grace of the Deer
>>>Perfect Aim
>>>Blademaster
>>>Colossus Hunter
>>>>Boomstick
>>>>>Saorna
>>>>>>A Divine Affair
>>>>>>Door to Door
gotta go fast
#3
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rakogoki (01/07/2016) [-] Fisty the Dragon
Olympic Parentage
Astazie gotta punch monsters, need to punch monsters!
Titans might bigger punching muscles for bigger punching!
Mantle of steel cannot stop the fist!
Marlins quickness to introduce fist to monsters quicker!
Serpents reflexes climb monsters to better introduce fist!
Fist of god stylish punching!
Colossus hunter let no punch go unchallenged!
Demi human be mighty dragon man!
Zosereb double monster smashing teamwork!
Flying horse help carry tenderized monster meat and wrestle flying monsters!
Boss monster punch ALL of his monsters!
The kyphian mines dark monster meat is the true reward!
Whales in the skyflying whale meat! find and punch those responsible!
Incredible vegetable perfect meat seasoning!
go around punching monsters a lot!
Olympic Parentage
Astazie gotta punch monsters, need to punch monsters!
Titans might bigger punching muscles for bigger punching!
Mantle of steel cannot stop the fist!
Marlins quickness to introduce fist to monsters quicker!
Serpents reflexes climb monsters to better introduce fist!
Fist of god stylish punching!
Colossus hunter let no punch go unchallenged!
Demi human be mighty dragon man!
Zosereb double monster smashing teamwork!
Flying horse help carry tenderized monster meat and wrestle flying monsters!
Boss monster punch ALL of his monsters!
The kyphian mines dark monster meat is the true reward!
Whales in the sky
Incredible vegetable perfect meat seasoning!
go around punching monsters a lot!
#9
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paddypancake (01/07/2016) [-] godly descent oreus
(5 adventures max, each 3 points
Boss Monster, Kyphian Mines, Devil without a Cause, Whales in the Sky, The Fire Witch
65 Points total.
Armed with Wings, Grace of the Deer, Manifest Essence, Arcane Insight, Avatar of Ice, Lightning Seer
Guardian, Elder Lore, Marlins quicknes
(5 adventures max, each 3 points
Boss Monster, Kyphian Mines, Devil without a Cause, Whales in the Sky, The Fire Witch
65 Points total.
Armed with Wings, Grace of the Deer, Manifest Essence, Arcane Insight, Avatar of Ice, Lightning Seer
Guardian, Elder Lore, Marlins quicknes
#8
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Petroleum ONLINE (01/07/2016) [-] Olympic Parentage, taking all adventures except Chesswolf, so +22 (72 pts)
God:
Lenya, because I'm a goddamn hippie.
Gifts:
Bulwark (-9)
Commander (-8)
Miracle (-6)
Virtuoso (-9)
Guardian (-9)
I, Othario (-10)
Invisibility (-16)
Weapon Summoner (-4)
Companions:
Zosereb
Rhiannon
Lady Asha (Why not?)
No mount, I got wings ***** .
Basically I'll love and be nice to all my enemies until they die.
God:
Lenya, because I'm a goddamn hippie.
Gifts:
Bulwark (-9)
Commander (-8)
Miracle (-6)
Virtuoso (-9)
Guardian (-9)
I, Othario (-10)
Invisibility (-16)
Weapon Summoner (-4)
Companions:
Zosereb
Rhiannon
Lady Asha (Why not?)
No mount, I got wings ***** .
Basically I'll love and be nice to all my enemies until they die.
#4
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migaelz (01/07/2016) [-] olympic parentage (all adventures -3 +18 points)
God:
Lenya
-no harm = no enemy
-free wings
-cheap miracle
(68)
Titan’s might (56)
Mantle of steel (51)
Falcon speed (37)
Serpent’s reflexes (27)
Bladesmaster (19)
Dual-Wielder (16)
Armed with wings (16) (free)
Miracle (10) (discount)
Black ice blade (2)
2 horses (0)
Companion: Mek’Kem (just cause he’s cool)
Adventures:
everything except for : Chesswolf, Solve my riddle, The fire witch
Most of these adventures sound fun, but I’m not confident that I have the smarts for the chess wolf or the riddle. nor do I have the stealth for the fire witch.
God:
Lenya
-no harm = no enemy
-free wings
-cheap miracle
(68)
Titan’s might (56)
Mantle of steel (51)
Falcon speed (37)
Serpent’s reflexes (27)
Bladesmaster (19)
Dual-Wielder (16)
Armed with wings (16) (free)
Miracle (10) (discount)
Black ice blade (2)
2 horses (0)
Companion: Mek’Kem (just cause he’s cool)
Adventures:
everything except for : Chesswolf, Solve my riddle, The fire witch
Most of these adventures sound fun, but I’m not confident that I have the smarts for the chess wolf or the riddle. nor do I have the stealth for the fire witch.
#5 to #4
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blackestblacksmith [OP]ONLINE (01/07/2016) [-] if you took all adventures, you should have +24
#6 to #4
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blackestblacksmith [OP]ONLINE (01/07/2016) [-] oh whoops didnt read the whole thing my bad
#2
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theroflcer (01/07/2016) [-] Origin - Child of Heroes (60 points total points + 2 free adventures)
God Blessing - Astazia
Companions - Hakkar
Mounts - (Not picking a mount)
Adventures - (3) 1. A peaceful Village 2. Boss Monster 3. Incredible Vegetable
Artifacts - The Raven Lance (51 points left)
Gifts - Wild Hunter (51) - Serpents Reflexes (41) - Shadow Warrior (37) - Exotic Warrior (33) - Colossus Hunter (Discount = 28) - Virtuoso (19) - Miracle (9) - Summoner (4) - Lightning Seer (0)
(Wild Hunter is free and black rider is 5 points less)
The general story I picked is I am a skilled hunter who travels the lands seeking to remove the wicked that traverse in.
After sometime I come across another traveler, Hakkar, he has a different goal to me, but we both see each other as equally skilled and enjoy each others companion for the time being.
An adventure we share before he is able to find what he's looking for, we happen upon a relatively popular village for its reputation of being a kind one, however, there is something suspicious on the situation.
A mystery is involved and I prove to be most useful here as I am very stealthy and understand nature well, which comes into play when they have a decent stock of a legendary vegetable that grows on the mountain, mountains are not too far from here, but how they have so much considering how dangerous it is to traverse the mountains requires questioning.
This leads to the Boss monster, who has tainted these very vegetables for a dark-plot of conquest, and it's up to me and Hakkar to stop it.
God Blessing - Astazia
Companions - Hakkar
Mounts - (Not picking a mount)
Adventures - (3) 1. A peaceful Village 2. Boss Monster 3. Incredible Vegetable
Artifacts - The Raven Lance (51 points left)
Gifts - Wild Hunter (51) - Serpents Reflexes (41) - Shadow Warrior (37) - Exotic Warrior (33) - Colossus Hunter (Discount = 28) - Virtuoso (19) - Miracle (9) - Summoner (4) - Lightning Seer (0)
(Wild Hunter is free and black rider is 5 points less)
The general story I picked is I am a skilled hunter who travels the lands seeking to remove the wicked that traverse in.
After sometime I come across another traveler, Hakkar, he has a different goal to me, but we both see each other as equally skilled and enjoy each others companion for the time being.
An adventure we share before he is able to find what he's looking for, we happen upon a relatively popular village for its reputation of being a kind one, however, there is something suspicious on the situation.
A mystery is involved and I prove to be most useful here as I am very stealthy and understand nature well, which comes into play when they have a decent stock of a legendary vegetable that grows on the mountain, mountains are not too far from here, but how they have so much considering how dangerous it is to traverse the mountains requires questioning.
This leads to the Boss monster, who has tainted these very vegetables for a dark-plot of conquest, and it's up to me and Hakkar to stop it.
#15
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Dieselfire (01/10/2016) [-] This is a great CYOA.
Pros:
good choice of artwork
great designed
Organized
Easy to understand
Cons:
Feels unfinished
no details for quest rewards or quest difficulty
missing gifts/skills that would be based on Intelligence or wisdom (see the chesswolf/solve my riddle quest)
equipment is all mythic-tier(where is the basic stuff?; possible implementation of money system for this)
Mounts - needs more input in this section
Companions - possibly more info about each one, with info about birth/linage, social status, economic status, sanity, emotional stability, equipment, etc.
I know a lot of the critique in the Cons section could be implemented by whichever group that decides to use it but I prefer if it was done by the original creator of this CYOA. I feel that this could be better then it's current state.
I really like this cyoa. Who created this one? Where was it found if no one on FJ made it?
Pros:
good choice of artwork
great designed
Organized
Easy to understand
Cons:
Feels unfinished
no details for quest rewards or quest difficulty
missing gifts/skills that would be based on Intelligence or wisdom (see the chesswolf/solve my riddle quest)
equipment is all mythic-tier(where is the basic stuff?; possible implementation of money system for this)
Mounts - needs more input in this section
Companions - possibly more info about each one, with info about birth/linage, social status, economic status, sanity, emotional stability, equipment, etc.
I know a lot of the critique in the Cons section could be implemented by whichever group that decides to use it but I prefer if it was done by the original creator of this CYOA. I feel that this could be better then it's current state.
I really like this cyoa. Who created this one? Where was it found if no one on FJ made it?
#14
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dubh (01/09/2016) [-]
Child of Heroes (60 points)
Patron God: Oreus
Necromancer -0
Third Eye -0
Wolf's Run -2
Serpent's Reflexes -10
Unseen Stalker -8
Arcane Insight -6
Aura of Dismay -4
Terrifying Visage -8
Spirit Channeller -4
Shaman -7
Boomstick -14
Mek'kem, Rhiannon, Hakkar
Raptor -5
Chesswolf, Incredible Vegetable
Patron God: Oreus
Necromancer -0
Third Eye -0
Wolf's Run -2
Serpent's Reflexes -10
Unseen Stalker -8
Arcane Insight -6
Aura of Dismay -4
Terrifying Visage -8
Spirit Channeller -4
Shaman -7
Boomstick -14
Mek'kem, Rhiannon, Hakkar
Raptor -5
Chesswolf, Incredible Vegetable
#13
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harleyquinzel (01/08/2016) [-] Olympic Parentage: Patron God Falkus
Gifts: TItan's Might, Colossus hunter, Fist of God, Unyielding Flesh, Serpents Reflexes (51) For maximum wrestling greatness
Companion: Ayme
Mount: Dragon (61)
Adventures: Whales, Boss Monster, Door to Door, Kyphian Mines, and Always Read The Manual, Incredible Vegetable (add's 12 to the 50)
The Legacy of Los Tiburon
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Gifts: TItan's Might, Colossus hunter, Fist of God, Unyielding Flesh, Serpents Reflexes (51) For maximum wrestling greatness
Companion: Ayme
Mount: Dragon (61)
Adventures: Whales, Boss Monster, Door to Door, Kyphian Mines, and Always Read The Manual, Incredible Vegetable (add's 12 to the 50)
The Legacy of Los Tiburon
#12
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narratorguy ONLINE (01/08/2016) [-] Godly Descent
Ariella
Commander-8
Miracle-10
Virtuoso- 9
Raiser of Dead-9
Lothario-2
Guardian-9
No artifacts, I'm support
Saorna, Mek'kem, and Rhiannon
I'll just spent my other 33 points on Mounts. 4 Griffons and a Horse for any Undead I particularly like or excels in mounted Combat.
Incredible Vegetable, Allways read the maunual, Divine Affair, Boss Monster, and Peaceful Village.
Ariella
Commander-8
Miracle-10
Virtuoso- 9
Raiser of Dead-9
Lothario-2
Guardian-9
No artifacts, I'm support
Saorna, Mek'kem, and Rhiannon
I'll just spent my other 33 points on Mounts. 4 Griffons and a Horse for any Undead I particularly like or excels in mounted Combat.
Incredible Vegetable, Allways read the maunual, Divine Affair, Boss Monster, and Peaceful Village.
#11
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kouzan (01/08/2016) [-] Mortal Progeny +50 points
Patron God: Oreus
[Gifts]
[Demi-Human](Manticore, Scorpion tail] -3 (47)
[Elemental Weapon] (Single spike mace to form over fists) -5 [42]
[Fist of God] (Unarmed combat master) -10 [32]
[Mauler] (Crushing, or blunt weaponry sends people flying applying to fists) -7 [25]
[Giants Brawn] (Superhuman strength, increased power) -8 [17]
[Unseen Stalker] (Ability to step into shadows and vanish, move silently]-8 [9]
[Weapon]
The Oliphaunt -9 This massive shield, which deflects the mightiest of blows will be worn on the back when traveling. In combat it is shrunken, worn on the arm to deflect mighty blows and keep on punching.
[Companions]
Zosereb
[Adventure]
The Incredible Vegetable, the goal to collect the pollen or seeds from the plant to replicate it. The exact use for it, not a clue.
This entire hero was made to punch things, to fight with his hands and prove his strength.
Patron God: Oreus
[Gifts]
[Demi-Human](Manticore, Scorpion tail] -3 (47)
[Elemental Weapon] (Single spike mace to form over fists) -5 [42]
[Fist of God] (Unarmed combat master) -10 [32]
[Mauler] (Crushing, or blunt weaponry sends people flying applying to fists) -7 [25]
[Giants Brawn] (Superhuman strength, increased power) -8 [17]
[Unseen Stalker] (Ability to step into shadows and vanish, move silently]-8 [9]
[Weapon]
The Oliphaunt -9 This massive shield, which deflects the mightiest of blows will be worn on the back when traveling. In combat it is shrunken, worn on the arm to deflect mighty blows and keep on punching.
[Companions]
Zosereb
[Adventure]
The Incredible Vegetable, the goal to collect the pollen or seeds from the plant to replicate it. The exact use for it, not a clue.
This entire hero was made to punch things, to fight with his hands and prove his strength.
