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#900393 - nittytipples ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Just finished this for the newest episode of KLK. Critiques would be nice.
#900471 to #900393 - nittytipples ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Ok so here is a quick rework based on people suggestions. I had to be a little quick because im going out to eat. Again would gladly accept any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism.
#900595 to #900471 - ehzio
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(03/21/2014) [-]
You did it! You fixed the arm, the eye, and the tits!    
Looks great nigga
You did it! You fixed the arm, the eye, and the tits!
Looks great nigga
#900493 to #900471 - warbob
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(03/21/2014) [-]
dipshit faggot biggot gay stupid good for nothing lazy ass person

am I being constructive yet?

you missed some details on her dress

#900476 to #900471 - nomora ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Much better
#900451 to #900393 - Rei
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(03/21/2014) [-]
The colours looks so dull
#900440 to #900393 - alleksi
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(03/21/2014) [-]
flat as fuk
head is hidamari as fuk

not gud git gud
#900442 to #900440 - thatnigger
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Not really as wide enough.
#900435 to #900393 - herecomesjohnny ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
why she got an adult body?
#900426 to #900393 - bababadsheep
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(03/21/2014) [-]
It's not terrible for western fanart. The giant face in the background is nice, I'd take a brighter version of that as a reaction picture any day.

Don't worry about the tits, even the Elevens fuck that up, pic related.
#900420 to #900393 - ehzio
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(03/21/2014) [-]
her left arm is a bit lower and looks like it's moving to the left in an uncomfortable position.   
hair is really dark and not enough fabulous to it.   
   
I don't remember Nui having tits.   
   
Basically just turn up the brightness in the drawing but it's real good nigga
her left arm is a bit lower and looks like it's moving to the left in an uncomfortable position.
hair is really dark and not enough fabulous to it.

I don't remember Nui having tits.

Basically just turn up the brightness in the drawing but it's real good nigga
#900423 to #900420 - nittytipples ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Yea i put a dimming layer on top of the project to make the glow stand out but im not really enjoying everything looking darker. Also someone else pointed out her left arm the problem is I cant figure out a way to move and rearrange it without redrawing that whole arm. Might do that. Also tits are fun.
#900424 to #900423 - ehzio
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(03/21/2014) [-]
just bring the left arm a little big closer to the chest. the only real glow i can see that is happening is the lights on her arm and her eye. I think it'd better if you just took the glow off and lighten up the picture, she'll match a lot better as a whole. At least make the tit smaller, she looks like she would be an enemy in High School DxD.

Also it may be just me but the pupil is really skinny. Are you trying to go for the starring-like look?
#900412 to #900393 - makotoitou
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Hair color seems kinda off
#900403 to #900393 - MatthewsGauss
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(03/21/2014) [-]
nui doesnt have any tits
#900413 to #900403 - makotoitou
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Don't you mean arms
#900414 to #900413 - MatthewsGauss
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(03/21/2014) [-]
that too
#900397 to #900393 - yuvesh
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(03/21/2014) [-]
chest looks flat
add shading to the dress

her right arm looks too thin joining to the elbow
the pose looks, unnatural but not too bad

the background looks nice

the signature doesn't match your username
#900405 to #900397 - nittytipples ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Yea its my previous account and my account for Tumblr/Steam/Ps3 and other major things.
#900406 to #900405 - nittytipples ONLINE
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(03/21/2014) [-]
Also thank you for the criticism.